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Water Can Not Quench

Cold, relentless rain Pound on heated, fevered skin Nature seems jealous Water can not quench, my love Nor contain this deep yearning Get Romantic - Poetry Contest : 8th Place Visual 2 Sponsor: Andrea Dietrich 04 March 2015

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Casarah Nance

Date: 3/11/2015 5:53:00 PM

Nice! Your take on the prompt was passionate, grats

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/9/2015 1:20:00 PM

Congrats on your winning work!!! Way to go..Enjoyed reading today..Sara

Arthur Vaso

Date: 3/8/2015 9:23:00 PM

beautiful!

Kp Nunez
Date: 3/8/2015 9:28:00 PM

Merci!

Skat A

Date: 3/8/2015 6:23:00 PM

KIM, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Win ~SKAT~

Kp Nunez
Date: 3/8/2015 6:57:00 PM

Hi SKAT, thank you for sharing this joy. Have a great week ahead of you! Hugs and smiles. :) Kim

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/8/2015 11:53:00 AM

Hello Kim, Congratulations, a mighty romantic win. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Kp Nunez
Date: 3/8/2015 6:56:00 PM

Thank you, Linda, for dropping by. Happy to see you share this joy! Cute avatar you have there... :) Kim

Hija De La Luna

Date: 3/7/2015 8:33:00 PM

Ohh, crazy lovely Kim! Screaming of romance eh..love this, my friend! Congratulations for the win!

Kp Nunez
Date: 3/8/2015 8:21:00 AM

Thanks my crazy beautiful friend! Nah...just oozing romance...lol! Happy you crazy love it! Hugs and smiles! :) Kim

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 3/7/2015 7:48:00 PM

A steamy romance...well done and congrats! Hugs, Rhonda

Kp Nunez
Date: 3/8/2015 7:51:00 AM

Thank you, Rhonda, for sharing my joy! How are you, hope you're feeling better now. Hugs and smiles...:) Kim

Jan Allison

Date: 3/7/2015 3:08:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats Kim:-) Hugs Jan xx

Kp Nunez
Date: 3/8/2015 7:48:00 AM

Thank you so much Jan! Hugs and smiles...:) Kim

Paul Callus

Date: 3/7/2015 3:02:00 PM

Glad to come back and find you on the winners' list, Kim! Congratulations!! // paul

Kp Nunez
Date: 3/8/2015 7:47:00 AM

Thank you Paul, for sharing my joy! :) KIM

Bl Devnath

Date: 3/7/2015 10:54:00 AM

Water can't quench..... beautifully done. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl

Kp Nunez
Date: 3/7/2015 11:02:00 AM

Thanks for dropping by, BL. I was kind of hoping you'll get to read my response on your post, the limerick - Such a sweet sorrow, with apologies to Shakespeare...haha

Kim Shaw

Date: 3/7/2015 9:21:00 AM

Congrats Kim! This is a fabulous piece, and it inspires me. Hugs, Kimberly xx

Kp Nunez
Date: 3/7/2015 11:27:00 AM

Thanks Kim. I should have followed the rules however, Andrea said I would have done better if I had. But than you for sharing my joy!!!

Viv Wigley

Date: 3/7/2015 2:07:00 AM

Fire and water. Love it. #7. Viv x

Kp Nunez
Date: 3/8/2015 7:45:00 AM

Thank you Viv. Glad you love it. appreciate your comment and rating! :) Kim

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/7/2015 12:22:00 AM

I really like this, Kim, but i noticed after placing poems in round two that I had let yours through with it having capitalized lines. It was a good one and would have done better if you had followed the rules on not using capitalized first lines. Congrats in my contest. It really is a nice one and I am so glad the picture inspired you.

Kp Nunez
Date: 3/7/2015 12:36:00 AM

Thanks Andie! Oh well, teaches one a lesson to be mindful of the rules...Appreciate my being placed just the same...Hugs and smiles! :) Kim

Cherl Dunn

Date: 3/6/2015 6:02:00 PM

Dear Kim Wow this is so out of the box, but it's simply beautiful lady, I loved it honestly, what a wonderful write about yearning for Spring, you've put alot of your inner soul into this write, again loved it, cheri

Kp Nunez
Date: 3/6/2015 6:15:00 PM

Thanks, cheri. It's really great that Andrea used an amazing array of photos to choose from in the contest. I loved the one that inspired this one. Have a great weekend. Hugs and smiles:) KIM

Emile Pinet

Date: 3/5/2015 7:44:00 PM

Your feelings surface and carry the emotional force behind your words. Emile. #7

Paul Callus

Date: 3/5/2015 8:35:00 AM

Water can quench neither love nor passion! Like the sensual touch! #7 // paul

Jack Ellison

Date: 3/5/2015 7:05:00 AM

A WINNER!!! Oooooeeee! Kim my darling, you is my kinda woman! LOL Loving hugs, Jacko xxx

Eileen Manassian

Date: 3/4/2015 4:40:00 PM

Lovely, sweet and steamy. Hugs

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/4/2015 3:16:00 PM

sweetened by you tender notes, kim... a most affectionate write.. huggs

Tim Smith

Date: 3/4/2015 2:11:00 PM

Very romantic Tanka Kim...well wishes in the contest....Tim

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/4/2015 4:16:00 AM

- Fits beautifully for the Visual # 2 - Gorgeous written, dear Kim (a 7!!!) - I wish you best of luck in contest! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 3/4/2015 3:13:00 AM

Captivating and very well expressed Tanka that gives refuge to deep feelings, dear Kim! Good luck!

Jan Allison

Date: 3/4/2015 1:33:00 AM

Very descriptive tanka Kim good luck in the contest:-) I loved the images Andrea found to inspire us:-) Hugs Jan xx

Jan Allison
Date: 3/4/2015 2:07:00 AM

I have another poem to post for later - a naughty limerick I finished last night - had written 4 lines of it 2 days before dad died - wrote 8 poems that day - its odd I had another burst of creativity the day before he was diagnosed with cancer - 11 poems that day - will be worried if it happens again! Hugs Jan xx

Jan Allison
Date: 3/4/2015 1:49:00 AM

Had a bad night - its dad's funeral today - am popping back to try and get some more sleep:-) Hugs jan xx