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WATER CAN NOT QUENCH

Cold, relentless rain
Pound on heated, fevered skin
Nature seems jealous
Water can not quench, my love
Nor contain this deep yearning









Get Romantic - Poetry Contest : 8th Place
Visual 2
Sponsor: Andrea Dietrich
04 March 2015

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/13/2015 7:36:00 PM
I could stand in this kind of rain all day.. Congrats on your win!
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Date: 3/11/2015 5:53:00 PM
Nice! Your take on the prompt was passionate, grats
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Date: 3/9/2015 1:20:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work!!! Way to go..Enjoyed reading today..Sara
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Date: 3/8/2015 9:23:00 PM
beautiful!
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KP Nunez
Date: 3/8/2015 9:28:00 PM
Merci!
Date: 3/8/2015 6:23:00 PM
KIM, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Win ~SKAT~
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KP Nunez
Date: 3/8/2015 6:57:00 PM
Hi SKAT, thank you for sharing this joy. Have a great week ahead of you! Hugs and smiles. :) Kim
Date: 3/8/2015 11:53:00 AM
Hello Kim, Congratulations, a mighty romantic win. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 3/8/2015 6:56:00 PM
Thank you, Linda, for dropping by. Happy to see you share this joy! Cute avatar you have there... :) Kim
Date: 3/7/2015 8:33:00 PM
Ohh, crazy lovely Kim! Screaming of romance eh..love this, my friend! Congratulations for the win!
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KP Nunez
Date: 3/8/2015 8:21:00 AM
Thanks my crazy beautiful friend! Nah...just oozing romance...lol! Happy you crazy love it! Hugs and smiles! :) Kim
Date: 3/7/2015 7:48:00 PM
A steamy romance...well done and congrats! Hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 3/8/2015 7:51:00 AM
Thank you, Rhonda, for sharing my joy! How are you, hope you're feeling better now. Hugs and smiles...:) Kim
Date: 3/7/2015 3:08:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Kim:-) Hugs Jan xx
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KP Nunez
Date: 3/8/2015 7:48:00 AM
Thank you so much Jan! Hugs and smiles...:) Kim
Date: 3/7/2015 3:02:00 PM
Glad to come back and find you on the winners' list, Kim! Congratulations!! // paul
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KP Nunez
Date: 3/8/2015 7:47:00 AM
Thank you Paul, for sharing my joy! :) KIM
Date: 3/7/2015 10:54:00 AM
Water can't quench..... beautifully done. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl
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KP Nunez
Date: 3/7/2015 11:02:00 AM
Thanks for dropping by, BL. I was kind of hoping you'll get to read my response on your post, the limerick - Such a sweet sorrow, with apologies to Shakespeare...haha
Date: 3/7/2015 9:21:00 AM
Congrats Kim! This is a fabulous piece, and it inspires me. Hugs, Kimberly xx
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KP Nunez
Date: 3/7/2015 11:27:00 AM
Thanks Kim. I should have followed the rules however, Andrea said I would have done better if I had. But than you for sharing my joy!!!
Date: 3/7/2015 2:07:00 AM
Fire and water. Love it. #7. Viv x
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KP Nunez
Date: 3/8/2015 7:45:00 AM
Thank you Viv. Glad you love it. appreciate your comment and rating! :) Kim
Date: 3/7/2015 12:22:00 AM
I really like this, Kim, but i noticed after placing poems in round two that I had let yours through with it having capitalized lines. It was a good one and would have done better if you had followed the rules on not using capitalized first lines. Congrats in my contest. It really is a nice one and I am so glad the picture inspired you.
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KP Nunez
Date: 3/7/2015 12:36:00 AM
Thanks Andie! Oh well, teaches one a lesson to be mindful of the rules...Appreciate my being placed just the same...Hugs and smiles! :) Kim
Date: 3/6/2015 6:02:00 PM
Dear Kim Wow this is so out of the box, but it's simply beautiful lady, I loved it honestly, what a wonderful write about yearning for Spring, you've put alot of your inner soul into this write, again loved it, cheri
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Date: 3/6/2015 6:15:00 PM
Thanks, cheri. It's really great that Andrea used an amazing array of photos to choose from in the contest. I loved the one that inspired this one. Have a great weekend. Hugs and smiles:) KIM
Date: 3/5/2015 7:44:00 PM
Your feelings surface and carry the emotional force behind your words. Emile. #7
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Date: 3/5/2015 8:35:00 AM
Water can quench neither love nor passion! Like the sensual touch! #7 // paul
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Date: 3/5/2015 7:05:00 AM
A WINNER!!! Oooooeeee! Kim my darling, you is my kinda woman! LOL Loving hugs, Jacko xxx
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Date: 3/4/2015 4:40:00 PM
Lovely, sweet and steamy. Hugs
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Date: 3/4/2015 3:16:00 PM
sweetened by you tender notes, kim... a most affectionate write.. huggs
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Date: 3/4/2015 2:11:00 PM
Very romantic Tanka Kim...well wishes in the contest....Tim
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Date: 3/4/2015 6:12:00 AM
Whoa.. When the rain hits this heat.... Steam!! A fabulous romantic write!
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Date: 3/4/2015 4:16:00 AM
- Fits beautifully for the Visual # 2 - Gorgeous written, dear Kim (a 7!!!) - I wish you best of luck in contest! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/4/2015 3:13:00 AM
Captivating and very well expressed Tanka that gives refuge to deep feelings, dear Kim! Good luck!
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Date: 3/4/2015 1:33:00 AM
Very descriptive tanka Kim good luck in the contest:-) I loved the images Andrea found to inspire us:-) Hugs Jan xx
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 3/4/2015 2:07:00 AM
I have another poem to post for later - a naughty limerick I finished last night - had written 4 lines of it 2 days before dad died - wrote 8 poems that day - its odd I had another burst of creativity the day before he was diagnosed with cancer - 11 poems that day - will be worried if it happens again! Hugs Jan xx
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 3/4/2015 1:49:00 AM
Had a bad night - its dad's funeral today - am popping back to try and get some more sleep:-) Hugs jan xx