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Water and Spark - Haiku 19

Written: June 12, 2025, for Contest by Brian Strand **************** s e a r c h ing for l i g h t \|/ \|/ *** w_ o_ o_ l s o a p w~a~t~e~r and the a r t of f e l t ing...\|/ \|/ ***

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Date: 6/14/2025 9:19:00 AM
A beauty. Congrats.
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Date: 6/14/2025 8:43:00 AM
Congratulations poet fried on your top win in Brian`s contest with a sparkling write of delight. Wishing you a sparkling weekend.
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Date: 6/14/2025 8:28:00 AM
I don’t understand the poem. Congrats!
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Date: 6/14/2025 9:32:00 AM
Kim, this poem explores the process of creation and transformation, using the metaphor of felting to symbolize the search for clarity, illumination, or understanding in life.
Date: 6/13/2025 5:28:00 PM
just delicious poem, very creative have a nice week end
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Date: 6/13/2025 4:45:00 PM
interesting format...probably need to reread to get the effect. Best wishes with the contest. Yellow Rose
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Date: 6/13/2025 10:55:00 AM
Hi, Sotto Poet, I'm not familiar with this kind of form. However, lines are great. Good luck in the contest. *LINDA
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Date: 6/12/2025 7:32:00 PM
I think we see the spark there. "Rat fete"- interesting. Can you see through the water? By scrubbing? Hmmmm
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Date: 6/13/2025 11:53:00 AM
Thanks for your comment, Paige. it's "art felting " dear Try to re-read it.

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