Water

Water

They shine like diamonds,
Only show when she's in misery.
Thinking beyond the horizon,
I can see it in the sea.

I can't stop them to show,
Oozing water in my eyes.
Anticipating your my beau,
I'm blind with you lies.

While you gave her flowers,
You gave me thorns.
This bogus love is ours,
You just showed me this in return.

Trusting you because you insisted,
Eventhough my heart is already twisted.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Breidenthal Avatar
April 6, 2019 at 10:33 PM
This is a wonderful poem! =^) Thanks for sharing on here~ -JWE
Rt Avatar
August 20, 2016 at 7:07 AM
Amazing poem, Jonna-sama! (Forgive me if you don't use honorifics, you are Filipino, after all)
Bickerstaffe Avatar
February 22, 2016 at 9:35 PM
Super write Jonna! Best wishes, Keith
Gallano Avatar
April 12, 2016 at 5:19 AM
Thanks a lot Keith :)
Andresen Avatar
January 17, 2016 at 6:17 AM
- A lovely sonnet, Joanna - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gallano Avatar
January 17, 2016 at 3:30 PM
Thank you so much Anne!
Boddie Avatar
January 16, 2016 at 8:34 PM
if my heart is hurting....you would be reverting....to a moment in time....when I could call you mine....but we both know the truth....I have seen no equal Beauty since my youth....and I only saw you then in my dreams....you're the greatest Beauty of my Life or so it seems....;)
Gallano Avatar
January 16, 2016 at 8:57 PM
Wow! Very inspiring!
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