Water

Water They shine like diamonds, Only show when she's in misery. Thinking beyond the horizon, I can see it in the sea. I can't stop them to show, Oozing water in my eyes. Anticipating your my beau, I'm blind with you lies. While you gave her flowers, You gave me thorns. This bogus love is ours, You just showed me this in return. Trusting you because you insisted, Eventhough my heart is already twisted.

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J.W. Earnings

Date: 4/6/2019 10:33:00 PM

This is a wonderful poem! =^) Thanks for sharing on here~ -JWE

Fm Rt

Date: 8/20/2016 7:07:00 AM

Amazing poem, Jonna-sama! (Forgive me if you don't use honorifics, you are Filipino, after all)

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 2/22/2016 9:35:00 PM

Super write Jonna! Best wishes, Keith

Jonna Gallano
Date: 4/12/2016 5:19:00 AM

Thanks a lot Keith :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/17/2016 6:17:00 AM

- A lovely sonnet, Joanna - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jonna Gallano
Date: 1/17/2016 3:30:00 PM

Thank you so much Anne!

Eric Boddie

Date: 1/16/2016 8:34:00 PM

if my heart is hurting....you would be reverting....to a moment in time....when I could call you mine....but we both know the truth....I have seen no equal Beauty since my youth....and I only saw you then in my dreams....you're the greatest Beauty of my Life or so it seems....;)

Jonna Gallano
Date: 1/16/2016 8:57:00 PM

Wow! Very inspiring!