'water'

Water gushed over parched land fractures are slowly filled left by drought terrain humidified by cold water pouring down replacing warmth everything ice-covered Water set in ice form fluffy and breathtaking an impish sting to its beauty arctic my clothes are drenched twirl around with outstretched arms tears are forgotten By: Wilma Neels Contest Name: Nature, Four In One 1st Place

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Jannie Breedt

Date: 7/20/2016 7:06:00 AM

Well done Wilma. Got my eye on you

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/7/2011 11:35:00 PM

Wow, a big congratulations to you, Wilma. Love to see your talent so recognized. LUv, Andrea

Kash Poet

Date: 3/7/2011 5:44:00 PM

This is a wonderful write from you Wilma!Congrats on your 1st place win---kashinath

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/7/2011 1:24:00 PM

Congratulations on the first place win in the contest of Constance, Wilma

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/7/2011 11:44:00 AM

Congratulations on your winning poem in Constance's Nature, Four In One contest Wilma. Love, Carol

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/7/2011 8:29:00 AM

This is wonderful, Wilma!! So deserving your win!!! Hooray for you!!

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 3/7/2011 6:18:00 AM

Congrats Wilma..well done, enjoy your big win. BG

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 3/7/2011 6:02:00 AM

Super duper congrats on your awesome win Missy -- totally deserved win with this outstanding piece :) loved this the first time around as well as now :) way to go & I hope Monday's treating you good :D hugs to you :D

Tahera Mannan

Date: 3/7/2011 12:23:00 AM

This was truly an awesome write dear Wilma. Warm congrats.

Harry Horsman

Date: 3/6/2011 10:19:00 PM

It's a honour to be placed second after this awe inspiring poem Wilma. congrats. Harry

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/6/2011 9:06:00 PM

you are tops, wilma... biggie congrats for the win..:) huggs, nette

Audrey Haick

Date: 3/6/2011 7:41:00 PM

!!! Congratulations on your huge, Ist Place Win in Constance's Contest, Wilma! Exquisite write! Love, Annalise

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/6/2011 7:32:00 PM

Big congratulations on taking the top spot, Wilma! So happy for you. Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/6/2011 7:15:00 PM

Congrats Wilma on another first place win today luv.. both well deserved for awesome entries luv.. enjoy your top spot where the air is ultra rare luv..

Constance La France

Date: 3/6/2011 7:14:00 PM

Congratulations, Wilma, on first place in my contest, that final Senryu, so visual, and something I would do. Could you send me your address by soup mail, so I can forward your Certificate of Achievement in Poetry, which is the prize for this contest.

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 3/5/2011 9:39:00 AM

Wow! This sure is a powerful & vivid write, Wilma-- I really like how you presented this, from water to ice (love how describe is as fluffy btw!) to bringing in a personal encounter in the end-- I hope this scores high, Missy -- this is wonderful :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/2/2011 11:40:00 PM

I guess I saw this one already. Hopefully I am caught up with all your poems. I just loved the way you brought your personal feelings into this one at the end!

Rushda R

Date: 3/2/2011 1:31:00 AM

really enjoyed. lovely write.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/1/2011 6:38:00 AM

Magnificent write Wilma with your four forms penned so stunningly my friend.. good luck in Constance's contest .. she did give us quite a challenge luv..

Constance La France

Date: 3/1/2011 5:10:00 AM

Thank you for supporting my contest.

Audrey Haick

Date: 2/28/2011 2:18:00 PM

Absolutely, refeshing, Wilma. Best of luck in the contest. As usual, very good write. Love, Annalise

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/27/2011 9:42:00 PM

Good writing, Wilma. Constance should like this one.

Kash Poet

Date: 2/27/2011 7:10:00 PM

Ohh Wilma !This is amazing !Love it very much----kashinath

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/27/2011 4:07:00 PM

wow, I loved the feelings you exuded in that last senryu. It really concluded it with a bang. Great topic and poetry. Luv, Andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/27/2011 2:25:00 PM

Elegant entry Wilma... flows together so wonderfully to convey the theme of Nature ..good luck in the new contest by Constance.. she will greatly admire this piece luv..