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Water gushed over parched land fractures are slowly filled left by drought terrain humidified by cold water pouring down replacing warmth everything ice-covered Water set in ice form fluffy and breathtaking an impish sting to its beauty arctic my clothes are drenched twirl around with outstretched arms tears are forgotten By: Wilma Neels Contest Name: Nature, Four In One
1st Place

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 7/20/2016 7:06:00 AM
Well done Wilma. Got my eye on you
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Date: 3/7/2011 11:35:00 PM
Wow, a big congratulations to you, Wilma. Love to see your talent so recognized. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 3/7/2011 5:44:00 PM
This is a wonderful write from you Wilma!Congrats on your 1st place win---kashinath
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Date: 3/7/2011 1:24:00 PM
Congratulations on the first place win in the contest of Constance, Wilma
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Date: 3/7/2011 11:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning poem in Constance's Nature, Four In One contest Wilma. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/7/2011 8:29:00 AM
This is wonderful, Wilma!! So deserving your win!!! Hooray for you!!
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Date: 3/7/2011 6:18:00 AM
Congrats Wilma..well done, enjoy your big win. BG
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Date: 3/7/2011 6:02:00 AM
Super duper congrats on your awesome win Missy -- totally deserved win with this outstanding piece :) loved this the first time around as well as now :) way to go & I hope Monday's treating you good :D hugs to you :D
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Date: 3/7/2011 12:23:00 AM
This was truly an awesome write dear Wilma. Warm congrats.
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Date: 3/6/2011 10:19:00 PM
It's a honour to be placed second after this awe inspiring poem Wilma. congrats. Harry
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Date: 3/6/2011 9:06:00 PM
you are tops, wilma... biggie congrats for the win..:) huggs, nette
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Date: 3/6/2011 7:41:00 PM
!!! Congratulations on your huge, Ist Place Win in Constance's Contest, Wilma! Exquisite write! Love, Annalise
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Date: 3/6/2011 7:32:00 PM
Big congratulations on taking the top spot, Wilma! So happy for you. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/6/2011 7:15:00 PM
Congrats Wilma on another first place win today luv.. both well deserved for awesome entries luv.. enjoy your top spot where the air is ultra rare luv..
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Date: 3/6/2011 7:14:00 PM
Congratulations, Wilma, on first place in my contest, that final Senryu, so visual, and something I would do. Could you send me your address by soup mail, so I can forward your Certificate of Achievement in Poetry, which is the prize for this contest.
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Date: 3/5/2011 9:39:00 AM
Wow! This sure is a powerful & vivid write, Wilma-- I really like how you presented this, from water to ice (love how describe is as fluffy btw!) to bringing in a personal encounter in the end-- I hope this scores high, Missy -- this is wonderful :)
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Date: 3/2/2011 11:40:00 PM
I guess I saw this one already. Hopefully I am caught up with all your poems. I just loved the way you brought your personal feelings into this one at the end!
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Date: 3/2/2011 1:31:00 AM
really enjoyed. lovely write.
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Date: 3/1/2011 6:38:00 AM
Magnificent write Wilma with your four forms penned so stunningly my friend.. good luck in Constance's contest .. she did give us quite a challenge luv..
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Date: 3/1/2011 5:10:00 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest.
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Date: 2/28/2011 2:18:00 PM
Absolutely, refeshing, Wilma. Best of luck in the contest. As usual, very good write. Love, Annalise
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Date: 2/27/2011 9:42:00 PM
Good writing, Wilma. Constance should like this one.
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Date: 2/27/2011 7:10:00 PM
Ohh Wilma !This is amazing !Love it very much----kashinath
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Date: 2/27/2011 4:07:00 PM
wow, I loved the feelings you exuded in that last senryu. It really concluded it with a bang. Great topic and poetry. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 2/27/2011 2:25:00 PM
Elegant entry Wilma... flows together so wonderfully to convey the theme of Nature ..good luck in the new contest by Constance.. she will greatly admire this piece luv..
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