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'water'

Water gushed over parched land
fractures are slowly filled left by drought 

terrain humidified by cold water 
pouring down replacing warmth
everything ice-covered

Water 
set in ice form
fluffy and breathtaking 
an impish sting to its beauty
arctic

my clothes are drenched 
twirl around with outstretched arms
tears are forgotten

By: Wilma Neels

Contest Name: Nature, Four In One
1st Place

Copyright © Wilma Neels | Year Posted 2011

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Jannie Breedt Date: 7/20/2016 7:06:00 AM Well done Wilma. Got my eye on you Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/7/2011 11:35:00 PM Wow, a big congratulations to you, Wilma. Love to see your talent so recognized. LUv, Andrea Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 3/7/2011 5:44:00 PM This is a wonderful write from you Wilma!Congrats on your 1st place win---kashinath Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 3/7/2011 1:24:00 PM Congratulations on the first place win in the contest of Constance, Wilma Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 3/7/2011 11:44:00 AM Congratulations on your winning poem in Constance's Nature, Four In One contest Wilma. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Carrie Richards Date: 3/7/2011 8:29:00 AM This is wonderful, Wilma!! So deserving your win!!! Hooray for you!! Login to Reply

Barbara Gorelick Date: 3/7/2011 6:18:00 AM Congrats Wilma..well done, enjoy your big win. BG Login to Reply

Kabuteng P.Ink K. Date: 3/7/2011 6:02:00 AM Super duper congrats on your awesome win Missy -- totally deserved win with this outstanding piece :) loved this the first time around as well as now :) way to go & I hope Monday's treating you good :D hugs to you :D Login to Reply

Tahera Mannan Date: 3/7/2011 12:23:00 AM This was truly an awesome write dear Wilma. Warm congrats. Login to Reply

Harry Horsman Date: 3/6/2011 10:19:00 PM It's a honour to be placed second after this awe inspiring poem Wilma. congrats. Harry Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 3/6/2011 9:06:00 PM you are tops, wilma... biggie congrats for the win..:) huggs, nette Login to Reply

Audrey Haick Date: 3/6/2011 7:41:00 PM !!! Congratulations on your huge, Ist Place Win in Constance's Contest, Wilma! Exquisite write! Love, Annalise Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 3/6/2011 7:32:00 PM Big congratulations on taking the top spot, Wilma! So happy for you. Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 3/6/2011 7:15:00 PM Congrats Wilma on another first place win today luv.. both well deserved for awesome entries luv.. enjoy your top spot where the air is ultra rare luv.. Login to Reply

Constance La France Date: 3/6/2011 7:14:00 PM Congratulations, Wilma, on first place in my contest, that final Senryu, so visual, and something I would do. Could you send me your address by soup mail, so I can forward your Certificate of Achievement in Poetry, which is the prize for this contest. Login to Reply

Kabuteng P.Ink K. Date: 3/5/2011 9:39:00 AM Wow! This sure is a powerful & vivid write, Wilma-- I really like how you presented this, from water to ice (love how describe is as fluffy btw!) to bringing in a personal encounter in the end-- I hope this scores high, Missy -- this is wonderful :) Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/2/2011 11:40:00 PM I guess I saw this one already. Hopefully I am caught up with all your poems. I just loved the way you brought your personal feelings into this one at the end! Login to Reply

Rushda R Date: 3/2/2011 1:31:00 AM really enjoyed. lovely write. Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 3/1/2011 6:38:00 AM Magnificent write Wilma with your four forms penned so stunningly my friend.. good luck in Constance's contest .. she did give us quite a challenge luv.. Login to Reply

Constance La France Date: 3/1/2011 5:10:00 AM Thank you for supporting my contest. Login to Reply

Audrey Haick Date: 2/28/2011 2:18:00 PM Absolutely, refeshing, Wilma. Best of luck in the contest. As usual, very good write. Love, Annalise Login to Reply

Robert Pettit Date: 2/27/2011 9:42:00 PM Good writing, Wilma. Constance should like this one. Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 2/27/2011 7:10:00 PM Ohh Wilma !This is amazing !Love it very much----kashinath Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 2/27/2011 4:07:00 PM wow, I loved the feelings you exuded in that last senryu. It really concluded it with a bang. Great topic and poetry. Luv, Andrea Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 2/27/2011 2:25:00 PM Elegant entry Wilma... flows together so wonderfully to convey the theme of Nature ..good luck in the new contest by Constance.. she will greatly admire this piece luv.. Login to Reply

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