Water

The deep depths of the
Cold and blue and silent for
A moment for me;
Wrapping around my odd mind,
Forgiving my small failures.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Roberts Avatar
October 7, 2010 at 8:33 AM
wonderful entry, congrats on your win in the contest
Neels Avatar
October 7, 2010 at 5:39 AM
I love your Tanka Alicia especially the last line, congrats on your win :)
Freeman Avatar
October 6, 2010 at 5:34 PM
Congratilations Alicia on your worthy poem's top ten win. Agape, Moses
Sweetheart Avatar
October 6, 2010 at 3:40 PM
Congrats Alicia on your win in Chris's contest with this excellent Tanka entry.. enjoy with luv..
Dietrich Avatar
October 6, 2010 at 3:05 PM
Forgiving my small failures. What a cool thought for topic of sanctuary. Congratulions, Alicia. LUv, Andrea
Fraser Avatar
October 6, 2010 at 1:07 PM
Many congratulations Alicia on your win in Chris's contest with this fine Tanka >> James
Johnson Avatar
October 6, 2010 at 11:26 AM
Congratulations on your top tenth place in this Tanka contest. Love, Joyce
Brown Avatar
October 6, 2010 at 10:45 AM
Congratulations on your win Alicia in Chris D. Aechtner's contest "T(h)anka You". Love, Carol
K. Avatar
October 6, 2010 at 4:28 AM
Enjoyed this one, Alicia :)-- congrats for being in the winners' circle! -- nikko :)
Horsman Avatar
October 6, 2010 at 2:17 AM
love the last line in this wonderful poem. congrats on your placement. Harry
Mehta Avatar
October 2, 2010 at 2:27 PM
Very impressive writenabout water, Alicia
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