Notes About The Poem

Water

Water
falls into
the hidden pool…..
Nymphs frolic happily:
Cool love.

lovewatercinqku

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Hiya Sharma

Date: 10/28/2024 7:14:00 AM

Oh wow this is such a beautiful cinqku! I love the whimsical and mesmerizing mythological image that you've painted with your shimmering words ~ it creates a refreshing aura... "water falls into the hidden pool" Ahh, enchanting how the mystery unfolds and nymphs frolicking really create a beautiful scene. Lovely write! Sending you light and best wishes always ~

Michael Tor

Date: 10/28/2024 3:39:00 AM

Nice imagery and gathering of Nymphs simple and creative my friend. Thanks for sharing...

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 10/28/2024 2:33:00 AM

Hi Victor, a cute teenage gathering hiding and having fun in their hidden place , a pool where water falls to make it even more exciting, very well penned dear friend. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/22/2024 7:19:00 AM

Hidden in their happy place, cooling off, enjoying friendship. Sounds like you enjoyed peaking in on their solitude ;)

Panagiota Romios

Date: 10/21/2024 8:06:00 PM

Fab image Victor. That last line?? Simply stupemdous. Hurrak Pangie xxx

Heidi Sands

Date: 10/20/2024 4:40:00 AM

Very nice. Freeing :)

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 10/19/2024 10:04:00 PM

A sweet poem, conveying joy in simple pleasures. Love it!

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 10/19/2024 3:44:00 PM

Lovely words and picture Victor… Beryl

Joseph May

Date: 10/19/2024 12:19:00 PM

Very nicely done Victor, best wishes

Ink Empress

Date: 10/19/2024 11:52:00 AM

Dear victor, i love the picture youv used and also the cinqku, so well written. Especially love “ nymphs frolic happily” so beautiful! Pleasure reading you! Hope you are doing well