Home » Poems » Darlene De Beaulieu » Watching the Rain Fall

Darlene De Beaulieu | + Follow Poet |

Watching the Rain Fall

the sky has darkened a child stares out the window watching the rainfall

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Frances Schiavina

Date: 9/9/2020 6:52:00 AM

Beautiful image of innocence. Child and rainfall. Well done.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/9/2020 10:06:00 AM

Hello Frances, thank you Frances.This was my first try at this form.Enjoy your day my friend.

Alkas Poetry

Date: 9/5/2020 3:58:00 AM

I use to do this when rain falls here...you catch the mood and the meaning of the scene...superb my dearest, xxxxoooo salute alkas

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/5/2020 11:35:00 AM

Hello Alakas Poetry, I like to watch the rain fall. I like the sound of the rain.When it thunders and lighting, I imagine the angels having a blowing game. The thunder is a strike. Salute Darlene thank you for the lovely comment. xxxx-oooo

Alkas Poetry

Date: 9/5/2020 3:57:00 AM

I use to do this when rain falls here...you catch the mood and the meaning of the scene...superb my dearest, xxxxoooo salute alkas

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/5/2020 11:37:00 AM

Hello Alakas Poetry, to hear the rain pour is so relaxing. It has a soothing sound. Salute Darlene.xxxx-oooo

John Fleming

Date: 8/31/2020 12:18:00 PM

Wow!! A fantastic Senryu, Darlene...truly it is. Your poem imparts such atmosphere...really is quite striking. I am very impressed! My very warmest regards. :) john

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/31/2020 3:24:00 PM

Hello John Fleming, thank you John, this was my first one. i will be creating more of these poem style. Warm wishes John.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/4/2020 4:15:00 PM

I can just picture this!

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/5/2020 5:11:00 AM

Hello Andrea, oh- I am pleased. Enjoy your day my friend. hugs Darlene

Michael Thompson

Date: 8/4/2020 9:49:00 AM

Beautifully written my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/4/2020 2:44:00 PM

Hello Michael Thompson, Hi! thank you for this lovely comment. keep well . enjoy your evening my friend.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 8/3/2020 10:13:00 AM

I can picture your words completely my friend, your imagery and fascination for poetry is evident Blessings and hugs Darlene, Jennifer.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/3/2020 2:58:00 PM

Hello Jennifer ,I am glad that you picture my words. in poetry. Thank you for the lovely comment. Hugs Darlene

Heidi Sands

Date: 8/2/2020 5:57:00 AM

I agree, this is great imagery Darlene. Well written :)

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/2/2020 1:03:00 PM

Hello Heidi, thank you so much for this lovely comment. I hope all is well with you. Enjoy your day my friend. Hugs Darlene

Arturo Michael

Date: 8/1/2020 7:46:00 AM

Nice imagery and sensory here...

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/1/2020 10:58:00 AM

Hello Arturo Michael, this was my first try. I wanted to do something new. I hope all is well with you. Enjoy your day my friend.

John Lawless

Date: 7/29/2020 2:31:00 PM

yeah.....and dreaming of jumping in all those puddles.....

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/29/2020 3:00:00 PM

Hello John Lawless, Yes a child would love to jump into the puddles. Children will do that. Enjoy your evening my friend.

Mitali Saikia

Date: 7/29/2020 12:47:00 PM

Lots of emotions unveiled through these three sweet lines .. nostalgia at its peak ! Thanks Darlene dear .. you took me to those childhood days .. love and hugs.. Mits

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/29/2020 3:03:00 PM

Hello Mitali, so nice to meet you. oh- you are welcome. Love and hugs Mitali. Darlene

Eve Roper

Date: 7/27/2020 1:54:00 PM

Darlene, and so, it is here to with the load roar and the gray dreary outdoors and in and instead of a child it's my little dog looking out the window. Hugs

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/27/2020 5:14:00 PM

Hello Eve Roper, Oh that is so cute Eve. What type of a dog do you have? Hugs Thank you for the lovely comment. Enjoy your evening my friend.

Michael Tor

Date: 7/27/2020 1:33:00 PM

Wonderful piece Darlene. Enjoyed so much...

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/27/2020 5:12:00 PM

Hello Michael Tor, Oh-thank you for the lovely comment. y first try at this form. Enjoy your evening my friend.

Panagiota Romios

Date: 7/27/2020 1:05:00 PM

PERFECT,... PANGIE

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/27/2020 5:11:00 PM

Hello Panagiota, I worked on this poetry. Thank you for the lovely comment. hugs Darlene xxxx-oooo.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 7/27/2020 11:58:00 AM

This brings back so many memories of growing up in the NW - so visual and captivating my friend. Thank you for sharing this rainstorm with us.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/25/2021 5:55:00 PM

Hello Sam you are so welcomed. enjoy your evening my friend.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 7/27/2020 11:57:00 AM

This brings back so many memories of growing up in the NW - so visual and captivating my friend. Thank you for sharing this rainstorm with us.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/27/2020 5:10:00 PM

Hello Sam Kauffman, you are so welcome my friend. I am glad it brought back a memory for you. Enjoy your evening my friend.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 7/27/2020 11:50:00 AM

Best place to view a rainstorm, mind you I've been caught out many times. Tom

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/27/2020 5:08:00 PM

Hello Tom, I do not mind to be caught in the rain as long it is a drizzle. thank you for the lovely comment. enjoy yur evening my friend.

Rico Leffanta

Date: 7/27/2020 11:33:00 AM

..and it was exciting! Aloha! Rico

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/27/2020 11:42:00 AM

Aloha! Yes it was. Enjoy your day my friend. Aloha! Darlene