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Watching the Enemy Float Away


Janey Jane ran around with Rocky Rock
Ohh was he handsome, the girls did they flock
Swiftly, Jane’s hair she did cut
Kay ran, laughing off her butt
Jane then smirked, as Kay fell from the dock

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Carol Sunshine Brown

February 10, 2012 at 6:10 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved feature Natalie. Love, Carol

Samual Ronthorpe

February 6, 2012 at 11:02 PM

Congratulations on having your poem featured on Poetry Soup this week.................S.Ronthorpe

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

February 6, 2012 at 9:49 PM

congrats Natalie on featured poem this week on PS.. wonderful one to share with luv..

Joseph Burchett

February 6, 2012 at 3:38 PM

Congrats ! Nice one brought a smile to my face.

Laura Breidenthal

November 2, 2011 at 5:42 PM

Very unique and original! A great poem and an enjoyable read indeed. Always, Laura

John Freeman

September 3, 2011 at 11:24 AM

Uniquely, wonderfull Natalie......congratulations on your poem's worthiness. Agape, Moses

Jack Horne

September 3, 2011 at 10:25 AM

Many congratulations, Natalie : )

Lori Lucas Mcclure

September 3, 2011 at 10:17 AM

Congratulations on your win!!!!!!!!------Lori

Caryl Ramsdale

September 3, 2011 at 3:24 AM

A Ninth Place Win Congratulations. CR

Lee Ramage

September 2, 2011 at 1:08 AM

Oh I love your humour, oh there were a few I wanted to push... class yes... great poem, I like your style. Will spend an evening soon reading your poems. Well done Lee

Wilma Neels

September 1, 2011 at 4:35 PM

hehe, love the wit of your write Natalie ;) congratulations on you win ;) Wilma

Carol Sunshine Brown

September 1, 2011 at 2:16 PM

Congratulations on your placement in Constance La France's "A Short Poem, Please" contest Natalie. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

September 1, 2011 at 11:29 AM

Congrats Natalie on this exciting win with lovely poetry so profound luv.. and a sweet dedication.. one we all share ... too cool...

David Williams

September 1, 2011 at 11:09 AM

hey Natalie, congrats on your great win, thanks for youe comments..David

Dr.Ram Mehta

September 1, 2011 at 11:07 AM

Congratulations on the win, natalie

Caryl Muzzey

July 9, 2011 at 10:08 AM

Congratulations on placing in the contest with this wonderful Limerick. A very creative write, I enjoyed the read~ Caryl

Sara Kendrick

June 17, 2011 at 11:35 AM

Congrats..Sara

Natalie The Rogue Rhymer

June 17, 2011 at 9:43 AM

Thanks everyone-I had fun-Congrats to all of you guys too :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

June 17, 2011 at 7:08 AM

My congratulations on this win in the contest of p.d., Natalie

Carol Sunshine Brown

June 17, 2011 at 4:41 AM

Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s contest Natalie. Love, Carol

Barbara Gorelick

June 16, 2011 at 8:11 PM

Cute! poor Kay..he wasnt worth it..lol congrats. BG

Poet Destroyer A

June 16, 2011 at 5:51 PM

Thank you for entering in my contest Natalie, enjoyed you entry, congrats on your win:),..p.d.

Carolyn Devonshire

June 16, 2011 at 5:38 PM

Nice work, Natalie. Congratulations on your win in PD's contest! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

June 16, 2011 at 5:08 PM

Congrats Natalie on your big win in PD's cool contest with this cool entry ..enjoy with luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta

June 12, 2011 at 7:54 PM

Wonderful entry to the contest, Good luck, Natalie

Natalie The Rogue Rhymer

June 12, 2011 at 8:01 PM

Thanks Dr. Ram! At first when I read what a Limerick was, I thought it would be too hard. But, I thought I was up for a challenge. I probably counted syllables 75 times and kept coming up w/ different numbers! Also, I thought I'd really"think outside the box" for this one :)

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