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Watching the Enemy Float Away

Janey Jane ran around with Rocky Rock
Ohh was he handsome, the girls did they flock
Swiftly, Jane’s hair she did cut
Kay ran, laughing off her butt
Jane then smirked, as Kay fell from the dock

Copyright © Natalie The Rogue Rhymer | Year Posted 2011

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Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 2/10/2012 6:10:00 AM Congratulations on your well deserved feature Natalie. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Samual Ronthorpe Date: 2/6/2012 11:02:00 PM Congratulations on having your poem featured on Poetry Soup this week.................S.Ronthorpe Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 2/6/2012 9:49:00 PM congrats Natalie on featured poem this week on PS.. wonderful one to share with luv.. Login to Reply

Joseph Burchett Date: 2/6/2012 3:38:00 PM Congrats ! Nice one brought a smile to my face. Login to Reply

Laura Breidenthal Date: 11/2/2011 5:42:00 PM Very unique and original! A great poem and an enjoyable read indeed. Always, Laura Login to Reply

John Freeman Date: 9/3/2011 11:24:00 AM Uniquely, wonderfull Natalie......congratulations on your poem's worthiness. Agape, Moses Login to Reply

Jack Horne Date: 9/3/2011 10:25:00 AM Many congratulations, Natalie : ) Login to Reply

Lori Lucas Mcclure Date: 9/3/2011 10:17:00 AM Congratulations on your win!!!!!!!!------Lori Login to Reply

Caryl Ramsdale Date: 9/3/2011 3:24:00 AM A Ninth Place Win Congratulations. CR Login to Reply

Lee Ramage Date: 9/2/2011 1:08:00 AM Oh I love your humour, oh there were a few I wanted to push... class yes... great poem, I like your style. Will spend an evening soon reading your poems. Well done Lee Login to Reply

Wilma Neels Date: 9/1/2011 4:35:00 PM hehe, love the wit of your write Natalie ;) congratulations on you win ;) Wilma Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 9/1/2011 2:16:00 PM Congratulations on your placement in Constance La France's "A Short Poem, Please" contest Natalie. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 9/1/2011 11:29:00 AM Congrats Natalie on this exciting win with lovely poetry so profound luv.. and a sweet dedication.. one we all share ... too cool... Login to Reply

David Williams Date: 9/1/2011 11:09:00 AM hey Natalie, congrats on your great win, thanks for youe comments..David Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 9/1/2011 11:07:00 AM Congratulations on the win, natalie Login to Reply

Caryl Muzzey Date: 7/9/2011 10:08:00 AM Congratulations on placing in the contest with this wonderful Limerick. A very creative write, I enjoyed the read~ Caryl Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 6/17/2011 11:35:00 AM Congrats..Sara Login to Reply

Natalie The Rogue Rhymer Date: 6/17/2011 9:43:00 AM Thanks everyone-I had fun-Congrats to all of you guys too :) Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 6/17/2011 7:08:00 AM My congratulations on this win in the contest of p.d., Natalie Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 6/17/2011 4:41:00 AM Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s contest Natalie. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Barbara Gorelick Date: 6/16/2011 8:11:00 PM Cute! poor Kay..he wasnt worth it..lol congrats. BG Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 6/16/2011 5:51:00 PM Thank you for entering in my contest Natalie, enjoyed you entry, congrats on your win:),..p.d. Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 6/16/2011 5:38:00 PM Nice work, Natalie. Congratulations on your win in PD's contest! Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 6/16/2011 5:08:00 PM Congrats Natalie on your big win in PD's cool contest with this cool entry ..enjoy with luv.. Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 6/12/2011 7:54:00 PM Wonderful entry to the contest, Good luck, Natalie Login to Reply Natalie The Rogue Rhymer Date: 6/12/2011 8:01:00 PM Thanks Dr. Ram! At first when I read what a Limerick was, I thought it would be too hard. But, I thought I was up for a challenge. I probably counted syllables 75 times and kept coming up w/ different numbers! Also, I thought I'd really"think outside the box" for this one :)