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Watching the Enemy Float Away

Janey Jane ran around with Rocky Rock Ohh was he handsome, the girls did they flock Swiftly, Jane’s hair she did cut Kay ran, laughing off her butt Jane then smirked, as Kay fell from the dock

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/10/2012 6:10:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved feature Natalie. Love, Carol

Samual Ronthorpe

Date: 2/6/2012 11:02:00 PM

Congratulations on having your poem featured on Poetry Soup this week.................S.Ronthorpe

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/6/2012 9:49:00 PM

congrats Natalie on featured poem this week on PS.. wonderful one to share with luv..

Joseph Burchett

Date: 2/6/2012 3:38:00 PM

Congrats ! Nice one brought a smile to my face.

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 11/2/2011 5:42:00 PM

Very unique and original! A great poem and an enjoyable read indeed. Always, Laura

John Freeman

Date: 9/3/2011 11:24:00 AM

Uniquely, wonderfull Natalie......congratulations on your poem's worthiness. Agape, Moses

Jack Horne

Date: 9/3/2011 10:25:00 AM

Many congratulations, Natalie : )

Lori Lucas Mcclure

Date: 9/3/2011 10:17:00 AM

Congratulations on your win!!!!!!!!------Lori

Caryl Ramsdale

Date: 9/3/2011 3:24:00 AM

A Ninth Place Win Congratulations. CR

Lee Ramage

Date: 9/2/2011 1:08:00 AM

Oh I love your humour, oh there were a few I wanted to push... class yes... great poem, I like your style. Will spend an evening soon reading your poems. Well done Lee

Wilma Neels

Date: 9/1/2011 4:35:00 PM

hehe, love the wit of your write Natalie ;) congratulations on you win ;) Wilma

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/1/2011 2:16:00 PM

Congratulations on your placement in Constance La France's "A Short Poem, Please" contest Natalie. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/1/2011 11:29:00 AM

Congrats Natalie on this exciting win with lovely poetry so profound luv.. and a sweet dedication.. one we all share ... too cool...

David Williams

Date: 9/1/2011 11:09:00 AM

hey Natalie, congrats on your great win, thanks for youe comments..David

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/1/2011 11:07:00 AM

Congratulations on the win, natalie

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 7/9/2011 10:08:00 AM

Congratulations on placing in the contest with this wonderful Limerick. A very creative write, I enjoyed the read~ Caryl

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/17/2011 11:35:00 AM

Congrats..Sara

Natalie The Rogue Rhymer

Date: 6/17/2011 9:43:00 AM

Thanks everyone-I had fun-Congrats to all of you guys too :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/17/2011 7:08:00 AM

My congratulations on this win in the contest of p.d., Natalie

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/17/2011 4:41:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s contest Natalie. Love, Carol

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 6/16/2011 8:11:00 PM

Cute! poor Kay..he wasnt worth it..lol congrats. BG

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/16/2011 5:51:00 PM

Thank you for entering in my contest Natalie, enjoyed you entry, congrats on your win:),..p.d.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/16/2011 5:38:00 PM

Nice work, Natalie. Congratulations on your win in PD's contest! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/16/2011 5:08:00 PM

Congrats Natalie on your big win in PD's cool contest with this cool entry ..enjoy with luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/12/2011 7:54:00 PM

Wonderful entry to the contest, Good luck, Natalie

Natalie The Rogue Rhymer
Date: 6/12/2011 8:01:00 PM

Thanks Dr. Ram! At first when I read what a Limerick was, I thought it would be too hard. But, I thought I was up for a challenge. I probably counted syllables 75 times and kept coming up w/ different numbers! Also, I thought I'd really"think outside the box" for this one :)