Watching the Earth Burn

The neighbors gazed at the sky with the nighttime stars.
There is plenty to see while they’re living on Mars.
Since the planet is dry with a thin atmosphere,
so much can be seen because the sky is so clear.
The colony has been peaceful and serene here.
However, concerns about earth clutched them in fear.

The colonists viewed as they sat on their front porch,
their home earth shining brightly like a blue-green torch.
From one hundred million kilometers away,
nations have begun to fight each other today.
One night, they were watching as the earth burned with red.
An atomic war began with millions feared dead.

The blinking light Morse code box relayed a message.
It described a global war with massive carnage.
“Detonations obliterate Australia.
Explosions decimate Cape Town, South Africa.
London, Paris, and Los Angeles are all gone.”
This made all speculate of what was going on.
“Are my parents, brothers, and sisters still alive?
From what happened, will civilization survive?
I have not written to my brother as of late
because there’s a five dollar first class postage rate.”

The new circumstances perpetuated fright.
The luggage store in town stayed open late that night.
The decision to leave was made amongst themselves.
By the dawn, the luggage disappeared from the shelves.

Based on "The Martian Chronicles" by Ray Bradbury

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 1/9/2012 9:40:00 PM
ps,you might enjoy Melancholia, the last day of earth as lived by a newly wed and her little family. It was a bit dry, but the ending scene, WOW.
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Date: 1/9/2012 9:39:00 PM
I have forgotten much of this story (bradbury one of my all time favorite sci fi masters). I can see you really love sci fi, Robert, and you told your inspired story so well in rhyme. congrats on hm.
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Date: 1/9/2012 6:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Debbie Guzzi's contest Robert. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/8/2012 10:20:00 PM
Congratulations Bob. Well written
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Date: 1/8/2012 8:34:00 PM
CONGRATS ROBERT ON HM FOR THIS DYNAMIC STORY .. ENJOY HONOR FOR CREATIVE ART.. THANKXX FOR WARM WORDS OF WELCOME BACK AND FOR MY HEALING HAND .. SLOW BUT SURE AND A LONG RECOVERY BUT GREAT ENCOURAGING FRIENDS LIKE U EASE THE PROCESS SO MUCH.. ..SO APPRE3CIATE YOUR COMMENTS ON MY POETRY LUV..
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Date: 1/3/2012 4:04:00 PM
I like this. Very Good.
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