Watching Or Being Watched

If big brother were watching me
just think  how insanely bored he’d be.
But never the less, I must confess,
I have been spied on ruthlessly.

Not one, but four pair of eyes observe,
disapproving that I have the nerve
to walk on the deck they’ve commandeered.
I am a monster to be feared.

They feed on the chow that I provide,
this creature whom they can’t abide.
Though their own mother approves of me,
I take one step and they all flee.

I don’t know why they’re so afraid.
Is there some subtle hint I’ve made 
that if into my hands they get
I’ll spay or neuter the whole quartet?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Williams Avatar
July 11, 2012 at 6:27 AM
Joyce congrats on your win..David
Brown Avatar
July 10, 2012 at 12:36 PM
Congratulations on your win in Susan's " Big Brother " contest Joyce. Love, Carol
May Avatar
July 9, 2012 at 9:23 PM
nicely done Joyce..congrats on your win
Lucas Mcclure Avatar
July 9, 2012 at 2:46 PM
congratulations on your well-deserved win! Lori
Poet Avatar
July 9, 2012 at 1:55 PM
Joyce congrats on your win!!
Sweetheart Avatar
July 9, 2012 at 1:10 PM
congrats Joyce on another great write and win for big brother theme luv.. awesome as always.. I am dealing with concussion now due to a nasty fall last week so been off computer for a while..getting back slowly luv..oh..
Merryman Avatar
July 9, 2012 at 9:55 AM
I believe if "big brother" is watching me he'll either be extremely bored or slightly amused. This is a cute write, Joyce. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
Richards Avatar
June 26, 2012 at 3:03 PM
I can't for the life of me, imagine anyone fearing such a kind poet such as yourself! :) Nicely done, dear Joyce!
Palmer Avatar
June 25, 2012 at 8:43 AM
big bad Joyce,lovely write dear,wish you the best in the contest
Courtney Avatar
June 24, 2012 at 8:30 PM
nice poem good luck in the contest.
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