Watch Out!

spider
climbing up
my bedroom wall
insects, watch out! she'll have
you all
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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December 18, 2008 at 8:43 PM
Spiders are very interesting creatures. I don't usually favor them on my bedroom wall (lol)! This is a great write, Nigel. So glad my song gave you a bright moment today. My poetry has certainly taken on a brighter hue since I found this little piece of heaven here. Thank you for all your kind words and wonderful poems. Love Robin
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October 27, 2008 at 1:46 PM
I got a good chuckle out of this one. I enjoy a bit of humor. This is a day brightener. Thank you for sharing it and for your kind words regarding my poem. Keep on writing. Karen
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October 17, 2008 at 9:44 AM
OUCH! LOVE IT!!
Mason Avatar
October 16, 2008 at 4:10 PM
Great write with this form, Nigel. Couldn't be more perfect or clever!!
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