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Wasted - Another Tragedy

Busking for breakfast in Kabul a puffed up dream idealology haze delineating freedom as mournful tunes offset tranquility Crowds gather to gawk sentimental shards of shrapnel life left unguarded wasted away another fateful scene screams

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 12/30/2017 1:56:00 PM
Great write my dear Dear Tim... hugs and smiles :)
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Date: 12/29/2017 11:05:00 AM
This is excellent. I have to pull out my dictionary really quick.
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Date: 12/28/2017 2:33:00 PM
“When will we ever learn?” Sad way to start a New Year. Well done Tim...
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Date: 12/28/2017 12:53:00 PM
- Tim, touching written .... the last verse says it all - Happy New Year! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/28/2017 7:13:00 AM
A wonderful opening line,"Busking for breakfast in Kabul." Nice imagery ... All the best Tim
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