Washington's 'Turkeys'

We are told that Franklin would have preferred

     The scrumptious turkey as our nations' bird

          Though old Ben's advice was scrapped

               A turkey might have been apt

                    Since Washington's 'turkeys' are so absurd

Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired
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Date: 8/7/2011 11:55:00 PM
another wonderful limerick BOB H., but, however i am glad turkeys are not our nation's bird... enjoyed,..p.d.
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Date: 8/2/2011 7:15:00 PM
I knew you would have a jewel in this limerick or is it a fowl joke!
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Date: 8/2/2011 12:47:00 PM
A great Limerick dear poet ! And I'd like to add; Mr. Loving is part right(write) here Robert. Franklin wrote his daughter a letter, six years after the Bald Eagle was chosen...he wrote to her that; I'll be curt here...he wrote that he felt that the Eagle was a theif, stealing other birds and animals catch, and that the Turkey was native to America. He wote that; 1784, and they shared that in social studies in the schools. I don't know where the Phoenix came from. Have a great day sir !, james
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Date: 8/2/2011 12:52:00 PM
How ironic Robert, Franklin, assimilated the Bald Eagle to the political rif raf of his day...still holds true to this day and age! (LOL) Later my friend !
Date: 8/1/2011 4:12:00 PM
Ah, great take on the feud among Franklin, Adams and Jefferson, Bob!! Very funny poem and sooo true. Jefferson wanted the dove, but Adams was adament about the eagle and no one could win an argument with him. He would have fit in well with today's Congress. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/1/2011 3:12:00 AM
Well put Robert..
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Date: 7/31/2011 10:08:00 PM
NOT! Franklin a free mason wanted the national bird to be the Phoenix. sometimes seen as a two headed bird. that was a myth they taught in grade school.
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Date: 7/31/2011 9:07:00 PM
ha! lol. I like your sense of humor :)
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Date: 7/31/2011 6:32:00 PM
Very nicely cut, turkey are but turkeys but, as polititians often are ... on the nose ... good on ya mate, Don
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Date: 7/31/2011 12:36:00 AM
love my turkey! great write. Lee
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Date: 7/30/2011 9:40:00 PM
hahahah, lovely humor flows in the write with a message, Bob
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Date: 7/30/2011 8:32:00 PM
let the games begin.. action-packed; humor-prone, lol, robert... a delight! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 7/30/2011 8:08:00 PM
"Gobble, gobble, gobble;" that's what they do: gobble up everyone's money, then cry "More."
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Date: 7/30/2011 6:36:00 PM
Right on the mark Bob as always.... well said and written...... So you ready for some Footbal!! Trades are going like a sale at Macy's lol.... Lets see where we are when the smoke clears... Hope your well.. Spent last weekend with cousins husband Paul, he is retired Lt.Col. in the Army. we played golf and talked sports... stay well my friend
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Date: 7/30/2011 6:22:00 PM
Tell it like it is Brother. Love this. It made me smile. God Bless, JB
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