Washington's 'Turkeys'

We are told that Franklin would have preferred

     The scrumptious turkey as our nations' bird

          Though old Ben's advice was scrapped

               A turkey might have been apt

                    Since Washington's 'turkeys' are so absurd

Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired
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August 7, 2011 at 11:55 PM
another wonderful limerick BOB H., but, however i am glad turkeys are not our nation's bird... enjoyed,..p.d.
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August 2, 2011 at 7:15 PM
I knew you would have a jewel in this limerick or is it a fowl joke!
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August 2, 2011 at 12:47 PM
A great Limerick dear poet ! And I'd like to add; Mr. Loving is part right(write) here Robert. Franklin wrote his daughter a letter, six years after the Bald Eagle was chosen...he wrote to her that; I'll be curt here...he wrote that he felt that the Eagle was a theif, stealing other birds and animals catch, and that the Turkey was native to America. He wote that; 1784, and they shared that in social studies in the schools. I don't know where the Phoenix came from. Have a great day sir !, james
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August 2, 2011 at 12:52 PM
How ironic Robert, Franklin, assimilated the Bald Eagle to the political rif raf of his day...still holds true to this day and age! (LOL) Later my friend !
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August 1, 2011 at 4:12 PM
Ah, great take on the feud among Franklin, Adams and Jefferson, Bob!! Very funny poem and sooo true. Jefferson wanted the dove, but Adams was adament about the eagle and no one could win an argument with him. He would have fit in well with today's Congress. Love, Carolyn
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August 1, 2011 at 3:12 AM
Well put Robert..
Loving Iii Avatar
July 31, 2011 at 10:08 PM
NOT! Franklin a free mason wanted the national bird to be the Phoenix. sometimes seen as a two headed bird. that was a myth they taught in grade school.
Susan Avatar
July 31, 2011 at 9:07 PM
ha! lol. I like your sense of humor :)
Johnson Avatar
July 31, 2011 at 6:32 PM
Very nicely cut, turkey are but turkeys but, as polititians often are ... on the nose ... good on ya mate, Don
Ramage Avatar
July 31, 2011 at 12:36 AM
love my turkey! great write. Lee
Mehta Avatar
July 30, 2011 at 9:40 PM
hahahah, lovely humor flows in the write with a message, Bob
Onclaud Avatar
July 30, 2011 at 8:32 PM
let the games begin.. action-packed; humor-prone, lol, robert... a delight! :) huggs, nette
Smith Avatar
July 30, 2011 at 8:08 PM
"Gobble, gobble, gobble;" that's what they do: gobble up everyone's money, then cry "More."
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July 30, 2011 at 6:36 PM
Right on the mark Bob as always.... well said and written...... So you ready for some Footbal!! Trades are going like a sale at Macy's lol.... Lets see where we are when the smoke clears... Hope your well.. Spent last weekend with cousins husband Paul, he is retired Lt.Col. in the Army. we played golf and talked sports... stay well my friend
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July 30, 2011 at 6:22 PM
Tell it like it is Brother. Love this. It made me smile. God Bless, JB
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