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Washing the Dishes

As clean running water flows through dirty dishes Immense joy and peace bathe her tired being While veined deft hands scour surfaces and edges She becomes aware of her body and breathing Immense joy and peace bathe her tired being As inner quiet rises and makes its home in her She becomes aware of her body and breathing As the plates and sink caress each other As inner quiet rises and makes its home in her She becomes mindful of herself and some truths As the plates and sink caress each other Her mind and heart unite which amazingly soothes She becomes mindful of herself and some truths As her ill thoughts are met with steel wool opposition Her mind and heart unite which amazingly soothes And her soul is animated like a new spotless creation As her ill thoughts are met with steel wool opposition False magnanimity is wiped with washcloth of humility And her soul is animated like a new spotless creation As clean running water flows through dirty dishes 8/9/14

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Date: 4/4/2015 10:22:00 AM
I have just seen this awesome poem on Twitter! The fella who posted it acknowledged both you being the Poet, and my competition. Here's a link to Mac's twitter page. https://twitter.com/justanotherleaf
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Date: 11/27/2014 4:49:00 AM
Twitter compliment: @oceanmckenzie · 22h22 hours ago @poetscott37 You're welcome. I've read Washing the Dishes by Hija and it is a lovely piece of poetry
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Hija De La Luna
Date: 11/27/2014 10:41:00 PM
oh! lovely, lovely, Scott! grateful here :)
Date: 11/22/2014 5:48:00 PM
Here we go Hija, I am finally tweeting the winners of my Solitude Competition. Hopefully this will gather you a few more reads.
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Date: 11/16/2014 5:17:00 PM
A well deserved top placement. An incredible job of weaving this form into a smooth and seamless read.
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Hija De La Luna
Date: 11/22/2014 6:46:00 PM
thanks so much, John!c your words are precious!
Date: 11/10/2014 10:43:00 AM
Congrats on your top win.
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Hija De La Luna
Date: 11/15/2014 11:18:00 PM
thank you, Abdul!
Date: 11/10/2014 5:22:00 AM
Hija, a wonderful poem with clean emotions of a dishwasher in work/solitude. Congrats.
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Hija De La Luna
Date: 11/10/2014 8:02:00 AM
thank you, Mohan!
Date: 11/9/2014 7:13:00 PM
Congratulations on your first place win with this stunning write.
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Hija De La Luna
Date: 11/10/2014 2:24:00 AM
thank you, Maurice!
Date: 11/9/2014 4:37:00 PM
Stunning write, congrats on top place. Loved it
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Hija De La Luna
Date: 11/10/2014 2:25:00 AM
thank you for loving it, Mark!
Date: 11/9/2014 4:26:00 PM
Poetry in humble tasks... Excellent choice of topic, Moon Child. BTW, if the urge to wash dishes strikes, you are always welcome at my house ;). Cheers, Roy
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Hija De La Luna
Date: 11/10/2014 2:30:00 AM
thank you, Roy! thanks for the invite, too! i hope no party at ur house tho :)) yea, i love washing the dishes, meditative for me and i find peace in it. God bless!!
Date: 11/9/2014 4:04:00 PM
very realistic imagery many congrats on your first place win hija:-) hugs jan xx
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Hija De La Luna
Date: 11/10/2014 2:30:00 AM
thank you, Jan! hugs back! :))
Date: 11/7/2014 10:34:00 PM
I've finally judged the "Solitude" poetry competition. Hopefully soon Soup will allow me to announce the winners in a Blog. In the meantime though, those wonderful lines that you have penned here, "... steel wool opposition" for one, and that sublime last stanza have earned you first place. I'm working on increasing my twitter profile again, so this amazing piece of poetry might get the readership it deserves.
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Hija De La Luna
Date: 11/8/2014 2:59:00 AM
wow, Scott! i am so grateful for this recognition. it is an honor to be read and rated highly by you. am looking forward to your twitter link :)) Kudos to you for holding this contest. thanks for the inspiration!!
Date: 8/17/2014 9:24:00 PM
This is very beautiful, I can picture this, the reality and than imagery.
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Hija De La Luna
Date: 8/18/2014 12:59:00 AM
thank you, arthur! i was thinking the form may not be that fitting for washing the dishes :))

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