Wash Day

Crisp breeze gently blows blue jeans dancing on clothes line November laundry

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Date: 11/21/2021 3:55:00 PM

Reading this fine haiku, I can practically feel the fresh, cool autumn breeze. Delightful!

Karen Jones
Date: 11/21/2021 11:04:00 PM

Thanks. This November in North Carolina has been very mild yet a few cool days so the breeze is indeed refreshing.

Date: 11/4/2021 11:21:00 AM

Isn't November laundry frozen solid where you live?

Karen Jones
Date: 11/4/2021 11:59:00 AM

Cool in the morning and warmer in the afternoon. But lately it has been unseasonably warm. We have 70s when it should be 30s 40s.

Date: 11/3/2021 6:10:00 PM

I love the fresh scent of laundry off the clothesline, well done~

Rico Leffanta
Date: 11/5/2021 11:37:00 AM

Will someone please tell me how to get rid of that "fresh scent" from my facemask?

Karen Jones
Date: 11/3/2021 8:05:00 PM

Me too Michelle. Thanks.

Date: 11/2/2021 12:13:00 AM

So long as it doesn't rain.

Karen Jones
Date: 11/2/2021 12:34:00 AM

Lol. No one hangs on rainy days. You then use the doors in the house the shower or go to the laundromat. Thanks Victor