Was She Crazy Or Had This World Gone Mad

Was She Crazy Or Had This World Gone Mad

As fantastic glitter flowed into a fast beating heart
she her dearest fantasy dared to not again relive
all of her life, beauty had been the hot, feverish goal
now in this purple haze she knew not where to start.
Could it be true that real living was so much, much more
than the shredded skins she dared to leave well behind
now she had seen it, its long hairy arms reaching to take
and deep into her weeping spirit, a newer hole it tore.
But it made no damn sense, it was neither man nor wild beast
yet she had seen the terrible thing that terrified so
it patiently waited inside her ghosted bloody dreams 
some black-nights it begged her to on its own blood feast.

And she wondered, what the hell is this place she is at
With padded rooms, her only visitor, a hungry rat.

Robert J. Lindley, dark sonnet
no date, probably mid 1970's
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023


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Date: 9/21/2023 6:48:00 PM
My dear friend, your dramatic poem takes the reader to the depths of a dark and desperate place along with the poor soul depicted in your ominous verse. Your closing couplet is pure gold, Robert. A visceral piece with a very interesting rhyme scheme that works well with your dark theme. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Robert Lindley
Date: 9/23/2023 5:04:00 AM
Thank you very much, my very good friend. This poem had no date on it.. I guess I was about 21 or 22 years old when I composed it. Imagination, I've always had a strong, vivid imagination. God bless you...
Date: 9/17/2023 2:26:00 PM
Great poem Robert. I read it several times. She looks in desperation. A pitty! But sometimes we feel like that. Nice one that makes you think a lot. I liked it Robert. I make it Fav. Blessings my friend.
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Robert Lindley
Date: 9/17/2023 3:11:00 PM
Well thank you very much, my friend. Especially so for the fav, too. In our society today there are people like her walking the streets. Very few people seem to care. God bless you..
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