Was It Love

He, momentarily 

looks in my direction

Now glancing away, so

how could he, when once he

told me I was his world 

Splinters of heartache pierce

my wretched heart disowns

Your heartlessness exposed



3/17/20
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Dietrich Avatar
March 28, 2020 at 5:22 PM
yes, the heart aches with this kind of thing done to it. Congrats for your win, Theresa.
Stephens Avatar
April 2, 2020 at 2:18 PM
So kind of you to read my poem and for your welcome comment
La France Avatar
March 27, 2020 at 10:15 AM
Theresa, congratulations on your win in my contest with this deep and emotional poem _Constance
Stephens Avatar
April 2, 2020 at 2:19 PM
I appreciate your placement in your contest. Thank you x
Roper Avatar
March 25, 2020 at 10:59 PM
Theresa, great poem and a big congratulations on your win in Dear Heart’s Alexamdrine contest-. Hugs Eve
Stephens Avatar
April 2, 2020 at 2:39 PM
Thank you Eve appreciate your reading and generous comment. Xxx
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