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Warrior's Lament Premiere Contest Winner

Mountain laurel perfume wafted in the soft breeze. Myriads of flittering birds sang in the trees. At peace on our cabin porch with feet on the rail Until a trumpet blast called me to hit the trail. When at last would come my soldier’s release To return to our laurels, birds, and peace? With the martial trumpet silent once more, All survivors returned to their home shore. Would I limp stiff legged down the last mile, To laurels, and birds, and your peaceful smile? Alas, but a dream that came not to pass. My future lay beneath the clover grass. Wrapped in red, white, and blue came my release, To scentless laurels, silent birds and wailing peace.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 3/30/2023 8:56:00 PM
Oh! That ending I didn't expect, but war kills so many... Well written, David, congratulations:)
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Date: 3/30/2023 12:42:00 PM
Gave me the shivers David, and then the tears began to fall. A poignant poem, it started out so pleasant. I guess the stories of those who came back changed or those that didn't come back at all had a happy beginning. So well written. I will add you to my list so I can read more of your poems. and a fave (even though I didn't like it).
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David Drowley
Date: 3/30/2023 4:21:00 PM
Wendy, Thank you for your truthful comments. I really don't like such harsh truths, but there they are. I was inspired to write the poem after a recent visit to the Texas Hill Country where my wife and I rested with our feet on a porch rail and smelled mountain laurels and listened to birds sing. What a way to start such poem. Again, thank you for comments. David

Book: Shattered Sighs