Warning

A warning to all Jacks and Jills,
"The world is full of manmade ills
that can't be cured by manmade pills."

Won 6th place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
August 16, 2011 at 7:59 AM
Congratulations on your win in Dr. Ram Mehta's "Triplet" contest Joyce. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
August 15, 2011 at 11:22 PM
Congrats Joyce on your super success in this contest with new form my friend.. wonderful words luv..
Mehta Avatar
August 15, 2011 at 9:30 PM
Congratulations on the win in my contest, Joyce
Nair Avatar
August 13, 2011 at 3:33 AM
really great..should win hands down, jag
Roberts Avatar
August 12, 2011 at 11:11 PM
good one Joyce, good luck in the contest, Dr. Ram has certainly been challenging us with new forms
Sivey Avatar
August 12, 2011 at 10:17 PM
I loved the meaning of this poem and the way you so eloquently told it!! Good luck in the contest!!
La France Avatar
August 12, 2011 at 10:13 PM
great, wonderful, fantatsic, best of luck in contest~~
Mehta Avatar
August 12, 2011 at 9:15 PM
Thanks for the entry, Joyce
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