Warmth of the Open Fire

In front of  newly glowing fire__the warmth
Fills the area in very front
Family draws close_warm against cold

Time today flew as trees were cut (down)
Cut just to the perfect length to burn
On the open fire  of night's desire

These hours of story telling__laughter
Make up for labor of timber felling
Time spent at the well drawing water

Here now time for discussions
Story-telling, laughter, memories
The fire softly lighting Mother's eyes
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 6/22/2010 2:27:00 AM
Beautifully done, Sara...brings back a lot of my own childhood memories! Love the last line especially - Tim
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Date: 6/21/2010 9:17:00 PM
story-telling(: a war open fire and the essence of family. beautiful write Sara. may you always be with your mother.& i am sorry i grossed you out.lol have a wonderful night. ~Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 6/19/2010 5:46:00 PM
There exists nothing more comfortable than an open fire place! Enjoyed your poem this early morning, Sara! Yes, I do believe that wild hogs do love mushrooms!!! Thank you for your kind comments....Gert
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Date: 6/19/2010 3:49:00 PM
reminds me of a wagon and a jug
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Date: 6/19/2010 6:08:00 AM
this poem gives so much warmth to my soul as i read it...thanks for sharing...very interisting poet...but i have to read other poets for now,,,if you got time just shoot me a message about a poem you want me to read...thank you...^_^..add you to my favs...
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Date: 6/19/2010 5:53:00 AM
a peaceful setting! Sara! thanks! jimbo
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Date: 6/18/2010 7:35:00 PM
Here we sit outside when its cool and light a big fire and we all sit around outside and watch the flames and talk of dreams and events in life so wonderful..your lines remind me of these times.. reminiscent of my own memories ..thankxxx for sharing.. with luv ..Linda-Marie
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Date: 6/18/2010 11:20:00 AM
Warming and beautiful as your heart,lovely!
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Date: 6/18/2010 6:37:00 AM
Sometimes sitting near fire can be so fruitful ) Thank you, Sara, for your regular comment on my poem.
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Date: 6/18/2010 5:44:00 AM
Nice feeling of warmness brought on very good memories. Loved your poem, and thanks for the s.m. Have yourself a nice and wonderful day,..p.d.
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Date: 6/18/2010 5:19:00 AM
Oh Sara.I Love this.reminds me of home and my small children...Beautiful! Love Jeralynn
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Date: 6/18/2010 5:19:00 AM
I enjoyed the warmth of The open fire
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Date: 6/18/2010 4:09:00 AM
nice work making me feel the warmth of open fire.continue this awesome work
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