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Warmth

Sunshine on bare legs Warmth soaking through me, carefree Berry picking days For Carol Brown's contest Why I am waiting on spring Thanks for the inspiration today

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Date: 2/9/2010 5:14:00 AM
See it made the hot poems list. Must be those bare legs. Mom
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Date: 2/5/2010 3:32:00 PM
All the elements of a nice spring day. If you please, I will take a pint of those berries. Mac
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Date: 2/2/2010 11:40:00 PM
Congrats on your success in Carol's contest. Very nice write. Best wishes, Caroline.
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Date: 2/2/2010 12:20:00 PM
I can feel the warmth!
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Date: 1/31/2010 1:54:00 PM
Wonderful warm Haiku for the contest entry.. mine is Softly Springing.. your words make me want Spring here much sooner than the 6 inches of snow we got last night... good luck in Carol's contest.. luv.. Linda-Marie
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Date: 1/30/2010 10:57:00 AM
The last line is priceless. Good luck in the contest. Love,daver
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Date: 1/30/2010 12:57:00 AM
Best wishes in the contest Doris.Thank you for your welcome comments today Rgds Brian.
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Date: 1/29/2010 6:58:00 PM
I can relate to this one, I sit in the morning, taking in the Arizona Sun like a rattle snake..good write...thanks on "You Can Run", glad that you liked it..Danny
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Date: 1/29/2010 6:52:00 AM
Lovely this Doris felt warm reading it , thanks for everything Daniel
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Date: 1/28/2010 9:11:00 AM
Soon daughter, soon. Mom
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Date: 1/27/2010 5:07:00 PM
To feel the warmth after a long cold winter is bliss indeed. This feeling comes through in your wonderful words. well done...Margaret
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Date: 1/27/2010 2:38:00 PM
Love the imagery. I loved those days too, doris!!
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Date: 1/27/2010 8:38:00 AM
Best wishes with this one Doris.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today
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Date: 1/27/2010 7:54:00 AM
Thank you Doris for entering my contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/27/2010 7:40:00 AM
Wish that those days will come back soo to fight the cold! Good luck for the contest, Doris..have a good time..Gert
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Date: 1/27/2010 5:54:00 AM
Sounds good to me. I am very ready for Spring. Very well penned. Best wishes in the contest. Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 1/26/2010 8:07:00 PM
You magically transport us to the wondrous summers of our youth, Doris. So much "warmth" in this terrific haiku! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/26/2010 5:45:00 PM
Watch out for those thorny vines....but the stained red fingers are worth every morsel! Lovely thought of days ahead....Good luck, Doris! ~ Carrie
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