Warmth

Daisies in full bloom Snow on the mountain above Warmth in the valley

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Brandon Allison

Date: 12/11/2009 11:28:00 AM

i like the haiku

Richard Pickett

Date: 12/3/2009 6:11:00 AM

Down in the valley...The valley so low...I soooo love your Haiku's...Keep them coming...Thanks for all your great comments...Now decorate that tree...lol RdP

James Fraser

Date: 11/26/2009 2:39:00 AM

Gorgeous Haiku Sara >> James

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/24/2009 5:37:00 PM

I could use some of this warmth right here today... and to see daisies in full bloom would be even better .. then Summer would be here instead of Winter.. beautiful imagery... keep them coming, Sara... I cannot go one day without reading your poetry... luv... "Sweetie"

Deirdre Omaidin

Date: 11/24/2009 7:55:00 AM

you depict a beautiful scene here, the whiteness of the daisies and the whiteness of the snow. very imaginative. thank you kindly for noting my turkeys poem

Jared Pickett

Date: 11/24/2009 7:26:00 AM

Visually appealing this 17 syllable poem......Keep em' comin'.....:JP]

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 11/24/2009 7:11:00 AM

sudd is the weeds and yuck that will tangle up on critters in the white nile river.

Constance La France

Date: 11/24/2009 4:29:00 AM

Hi Sara, thank you so much for your comment on my poem "jupiter an eruopa". If you do a google search under Guido Reni, the artist, you should find it. It hangs in the National Gallery of Canada, and I was struck by the beautiful colors. It has been painted by many artists but this one in particular is the best. This Haiku of yours, is very enchanting, makes me feel at one with nature. Well written. It is very cold here in my part of the world today, Canada,no snow yet!