Warmth

Daisies in full bloom
Snow on the mountain above
Warmth in the valley
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Allison Avatar
December 11, 2009 at 11:28 AM
i like the haiku
Pickett Avatar
December 3, 2009 at 6:11 AM
Down in the valley...The valley so low...I soooo love your Haiku's...Keep them coming...Thanks for all your great comments...Now decorate that tree...lol RdP
Fraser Avatar
November 26, 2009 at 2:39 AM
Gorgeous Haiku Sara >> James
Sweetheart Avatar
November 24, 2009 at 5:37 PM
I could use some of this warmth right here today... and to see daisies in full bloom would be even better .. then Summer would be here instead of Winter.. beautiful imagery... keep them coming, Sara... I cannot go one day without reading your poetry... luv... "Sweetie"
Omaidin Avatar
November 24, 2009 at 7:55 AM
you depict a beautiful scene here, the whiteness of the daisies and the whiteness of the snow. very imaginative. thank you kindly for noting my turkeys poem
Pickett Avatar
November 24, 2009 at 7:26 AM
Visually appealing this 17 syllable poem......Keep em' comin'.....:JP]
Culverhouse Avatar
November 24, 2009 at 7:11 AM
sudd is the weeds and yuck that will tangle up on critters in the white nile river.
La France Avatar
November 24, 2009 at 4:29 AM
Hi Sara, thank you so much for your comment on my poem "jupiter an eruopa". If you do a google search under Guido Reni, the artist, you should find it. It hangs in the National Gallery of Canada, and I was struck by the beautiful colors. It has been painted by many artists but this one in particular is the best. This Haiku of yours, is very enchanting, makes me feel at one with nature. Well written. It is very cold here in my part of the world today, Canada,no snow yet!
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