Warmth

Sun
kiss me
your sweet rays
let your warm breath
touched upon my face 
bathe me with your radiance
and witness as a smile blooms
from my eyes that glow in surprise
to my full lips longing to be sealed
by an endearing and passionate kiss!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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September 29, 2009 at 11:47 AM
Teresita, congratulations on making the first round of the contest...Raul
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September 26, 2009 at 3:42 AM
Congrats 2u your poem making it through to the finals, bravo!
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September 25, 2009 at 4:33 PM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week >> James
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September 25, 2009 at 1:56 PM
Congratulations on making it through the first round in the contest. Good luck in the finals! Karen
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September 24, 2009 at 6:54 PM
Congratulations on your featured poem great form! Laura :)
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September 24, 2009 at 1:53 PM
Congrats!! Love Light Truth Patricia
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September 24, 2009 at 1:39 PM
Fitting title! Your poem made me smile. Congratulations on having it featured. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen
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September 24, 2009 at 11:44 AM
Teresita, congrats on being featured this week...Raul
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September 24, 2009 at 10:06 AM
Congratulations on your poem making it through the first round.Wishing you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
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September 24, 2009 at 8:51 AM
WOW!!! VERY TROPICAL, I'M IN LOVE WITH THIS POEM. VERY VERY VERY VERY NICELY PUT, LOVE THE METAPHOR...LONG LIVE LOVE!!! ONE OF MY FAVORITE :)
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September 24, 2009 at 6:29 AM
Congatulations on this well derserved feature of the week. AWESOME Etheree!, dear Teresita. Lainie
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September 24, 2009 at 4:21 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Teresita. Love, Carol
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October 20, 2008 at 12:50 PM
Wow! Superb poetry! Congratulations Teresita on your Second Place win in Mark's contest! So well done! Love, Shar
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October 20, 2008 at 7:21 AM
Wow....this does deserve to be a winner in Mark's contest! Congratulations, Teresita!! ~ Carrie
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October 9, 2008 at 6:49 AM
Full of passion teresita.rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
White Avatar
October 8, 2008 at 3:00 PM
what a beautiful write love the metaphors, great write, thanks for your comments, take care D-ncye
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