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Warmth

Sun kiss me your sweet rays let your warm breath touched upon my face bathe me with your radiance and witness as a smile blooms from my eyes that glow in surprise to my full lips longing to be sealed by an endearing and passionate kiss!

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Date: 9/29/2009 11:47:00 AM
Teresita, congratulations on making the first round of the contest...Raul
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Date: 9/26/2009 3:42:00 AM
Congrats 2u your poem making it through to the finals, bravo!
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Date: 9/25/2009 4:33:00 PM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week >> James
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Date: 9/25/2009 1:56:00 PM
Congratulations on making it through the first round in the contest. Good luck in the finals! Karen
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Date: 9/24/2009 6:54:00 PM
Congratulations on your featured poem great form! Laura :)
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Date: 9/24/2009 1:53:00 PM
Congrats!! Love Light Truth Patricia
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Date: 9/24/2009 1:39:00 PM
Fitting title! Your poem made me smile. Congratulations on having it featured. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 9/24/2009 11:44:00 AM
Teresita, congrats on being featured this week...Raul
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Date: 9/24/2009 10:06:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem making it through the first round.Wishing you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/24/2009 8:51:00 AM
WOW!!! VERY TROPICAL, I'M IN LOVE WITH THIS POEM. VERY VERY VERY VERY NICELY PUT, LOVE THE METAPHOR...LONG LIVE LOVE!!! ONE OF MY FAVORITE :)
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Date: 9/24/2009 6:29:00 AM
Congatulations on this well derserved feature of the week. AWESOME Etheree!, dear Teresita. Lainie
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Date: 9/24/2009 4:21:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Teresita. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/20/2008 12:50:00 PM
Wow! Superb poetry! Congratulations Teresita on your Second Place win in Mark's contest! So well done! Love, Shar
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Date: 10/20/2008 7:21:00 AM
Wow....this does deserve to be a winner in Mark's contest! Congratulations, Teresita!! ~ Carrie
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Date: 10/9/2008 6:49:00 AM
Full of passion teresita.rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 10/8/2008 3:00:00 PM
what a beautiful write love the metaphors, great write, thanks for your comments, take care D-ncye
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