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"warm Thoughts"

Your neck is warm,
                   your hands are soft
                                         and those lips are candy..

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Poet Destroyer A

December 10, 2012 at 10:01 PM

you are a warmer and a charmer...pd

James Fraser

August 23, 2010 at 12:44 PM

The nibble of the nape in warm delivering quake. Like bees to the pollen, sweet Senyru >> James

Carolyn Devonshire

August 22, 2010 at 2:47 PM

Very tender and sweet, Michael. Enjoyed your romantic senryu! Love, Carolyn

Katherine Stella

August 22, 2010 at 12:07 PM

sounds like a yummy treat for all to pass around the campfire lol me goign to call you old softy lmao loved the imagery and makes me jealous yikes hey mike thanks again for your warm comments keep up the great work my friend

Barbara Gorelick

August 22, 2010 at 11:41 AM

Yikes..good one..BG

Sharon Tideswell

August 22, 2010 at 11:32 AM

How lovely! Enjoyed your 'warm thought' very much ~ Sharon :)

August 22, 2010 at 10:37 AM

Got a chuckle out of the last line. Thanks for sharing this day brightener. Keep on writing. Thank you for your kind comments. Have a good week. Karen