Warm Soup

For a week or two my soup was cold my thoughts and rhymes weren't in the bowl now the soup begins to warm and my words are free to form

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Team Poetrysoup

Date: 5/30/2022 3:40:00 PM

Nice

Ann Foster

Date: 6/26/2021 1:39:00 PM

Wonderful... Ann

Trevor Mcleod

Date: 1/25/2021 11:28:00 AM

Who's souping who Mark. LOL Great idea you had here. Loved the read. Trevor

Jan Allison

Date: 6/29/2019 5:02:00 PM

You made me smile Mark as my muse has gone awol I have had little time for soup or writing and its so unlike me but maybe my husbands cancer therapy recently has given me something else to focus on but now we are back home the muse is showing signs of coming out of hiding at last:-) hugs Jan x

Reason A. Poteet

Date: 6/29/2019 1:36:00 PM

glad you got your muse back, congrats on the feature.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 6/29/2019 12:02:00 PM

Congratulations Mark, with this poem being featured on the site homepage. Sometimes, words need to gather before they are placed upon the page. Patience is a Virtue. I am happy the words found you and your muse. :) Brandy

Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 6/25/2019 1:25:00 AM

now the poetic words best ingredients for the soup, warm soup...// superb write

Skat A

Date: 11/28/2015 10:11:00 PM

Good reason to go AWOL. SKAT

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/10/2014 9:44:00 PM

how nice. Where have you gone?

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/21/2013 9:00:00 AM

I am now discovering this side of the soup. Makes me wonder... anyways... The soup is getting cold again... How about writing a poem honoring all soup poets.. :-)..:-)... lol.. JK... as if you had the time.. always & forever .. LINDA aka -PD

Gail Debole

Date: 3/8/2012 2:33:00 PM

Hi Mark - I can see that this was written awhile ago, but I just jumped into the soup a few weeks ago, and just wanted to say I do love this poem. You say so much with a one powerful metaphor and a few words.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/20/2011 7:43:00 AM

Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you and yours Mark. Love and blessings, Carol

Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 6/7/2011 11:04:00 AM

Ohhhhhh..missed your ingredients, Mark! Hoping all's well with you! Mikki

Mark Pringle

Date: 4/23/2011 12:20:00 PM

Karen was here! LOL

Date: 4/1/2011 1:47:00 PM

Dear Mark, thank you for asking about me. I'm still at the site but not as much as I used to be. I see you haven't posted a new poem in awhile either. Hope you are still writing. I've been trying to get a better balance with my writing and getting back to submitting for print publication. I enjoyed reading this poem again today. Have a wonderful weekend. Karen

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 3/30/2011 8:08:00 AM

What a great poem! I love the simplicity of it and the unusual analogy. It's very clever!

Cherie Durbin

Date: 3/29/2011 8:35:00 AM

Glad you got your soup back, Mark!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/26/2010 6:46:00 PM

So cute, and thanks for commenting on my blog. That stupid sucking LOST. LUv, Andrea

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/1/2010 1:51:00 PM

Sounds good to me, well done on your warm soup poem,..p.d.

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 5/1/2010 11:11:00 AM

Great work!! Love it!!

Iolanda Scripca

Date: 9/1/2009 9:40:00 PM

I just finished remodeling my kitchen. It's gorgeous. Hey, you guys, let's have a soup party! :) Love, Iolanda

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/21/2009 4:40:00 AM

Mark, where are you? You turned the soup pot on and left the stove. The pot is running over. Time for you to get back here and clean up the mess you left behind. Love, Carol

Sue Mason

Date: 5/23/2009 3:35:00 PM

Awesome and very clever ... but, its been tooo long since you've been in the Soup. Hope you come back soon with more great writing!!

Ali Matheny

Date: 12/28/2008 3:42:00 PM

I LOVE IT!!!!! How old r u?

John Heck

Date: 12/28/2008 2:57:00 PM

Dear Mark - I know the feeling...we call it writer's block? I, myself, experience these lapse(s)... often. LOL! No need to worry though - you've created a wonderful community here at PSoup. Never a moment goes by when one can/can't click onto this site and be "poetically" rejuvenated again! You and your team have done a great job here. I thank you for that. Wishing you and your loved ones a Happy New Year. Best wishes and peace always, John