Warm Solar Love

a soul orbits 
looking into space
searching beyond
staring at 
an orange full
cold  moon
rising peacefully
into the sea of tranquility
floating air labored
softly gasping for breath
exploding stars
lights up
the sky

wrath of the sun's light
bombards this earth
explosive  fireworks 
pulsing inside  
emotions erupt
bursting solar colours
feelings flare beautifully
flashing the beginning 
of a strong orbiting cycle

magnetic crochet
strongly pulls
gently sewing together
embraces warm rays 
kisses sweetly
with her soft fingers
weaving love deeply
blissfully into 
one's heart

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 10/4/2014 12:16:00 PM
WOW! Such superb imagery..."magnetic crochet strongly pulls gently sewing together embraces warm rays" This entire poem drew me in as fast as lightning, and I love that last stanza. How lovely...thanks for sharing, and also, thanks for the visits on my poetry. Hope you have a great week ahead. Always,Laura
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/4/2014 12:40:00 PM
wonderful comment laura you never know what kind of poem i will come up with next thank you for your kindness dear friebd deeply appreciated
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/4/2014 12:40:00 PM
Date: 12/17/2013 9:25:00 AM
Thank you, a very enjoyable verse for a snowy day! Light & Love
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Date: 12/17/2013 5:38:00 AM
Enjoyed your write on love and romance, liam
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Date: 12/16/2013 5:52:00 PM
superb Liam well done mate Shadow x smile hugs
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Date: 12/16/2013 3:16:00 PM
Hi dear Liam..This is one of your best masterpieces and going to my fvs.: )
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Date: 12/16/2013 11:50:00 AM
Liam......it doesn't get better than this. One of your absolute best. I LOVE THIS! You are going to my favorite poet file!!! Hugs!
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