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Ward Place

The neighbourhood was very rough; My gran was sweet but, oh, so tough. Most people didn’t go to work - My mother said they’d rather shirk. Some disappeared and then returned (They’d been in jail, I later learned). The local toughs respected Gran And came to call for buns or flan. Next door, there lived a dozen boys - They dressed in rags and had no toys. Although my family moved away, I dream of Ward Place to this day.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 9/15/2014 8:03:00 PM
I grew up in a very dysfunctional neighborhood as well. I liked Your Poem.I have moved on with My Life but I never forgot it either.Your Poem was simple and neat with a very suitable title.I really enjoyed it's style and not only did I relate to it.I could understand it.Thank You for staying away from large words that make some other poems I have read harder to comprehend.Very nice write.Thank You for sharing this with Me;Friend...
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Date: 9/15/2014 2:28:00 PM
This connects. I live in such a neighborhood this very minute. Well, not quite as bad, but we have walk-by, drive-by shootings and crack houses, a murder on the corner. I'd move, but who the hell would buy my house? Good stuff, Jack. Congrats on the selection. daver
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Date: 9/15/2014 8:29:00 AM
What a great little poem. I recognise that sort of gran.. Gran's used to be so much older, if you know what I mean!
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Date: 6/8/2011 9:22:00 PM
what a place that was! Mine was Muscatine, Iowa! Thanks for your lovely comments today, Jack. Sorry I could find very few of your poems to comment to. every time I see one I think is new, I click on it and see it is not a new one for me! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 3/6/2011 6:50:00 AM
I hope you have entered this in Michael's "Change of View" contest, Jack. It's wonderful that your Gran was respected by these boys and she provided them with food. Very touching write, my friend. Love, Carolyn
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