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Warblers Warble

Once
dormant
seeds bloom in
white, red and pink
tulips with perfumed
primrose on a green quilt.
Basking in warmer weather,
warblers warble a sweet chorus,
perched on branches with fresh verdant leaves,
as nature revives its breath taking charm.

Copyright © Silent One | Year Posted 2024

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Sara Kendrick Date: 3/4/2024 7:49:00 AM I have read your winning work and found it to be very interesting. Congratulations!! Way to go. Sara K Login to Reply

Paula Goldsmith Date: 3/4/2024 7:17:00 AM Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your colorful/lovely Spring write. Spring will be here very soon with pretty flowers everywhere.... Have a wonderful day/week writing away.......... Login to Reply

Valsa George Date: 3/3/2024 7:32:00 PM Back to your beautiful poem, dear Silent One on your well-deserved first place win. Login to Reply

Tania Kitchin Date: 3/3/2024 12:35:00 PM Silent One, congratulations on your first place win with your sweet poem, I can hear the warblers! Login to Reply

Valsa George Date: 2/24/2024 10:33:00 PM Tulips and primrose on a carpet of green and warblers warbling on tree tops of fresh verdant foliage. What a lovely scene you have painted! Beautiful etheree , dear Silent One Login to Reply

Jude Herrick Date: 2/24/2024 8:12:00 AM I tell you what, those warblers know how to bask their tail feathers off, with... "perched on branches with fresh verdant leaves, as nature revives its breath taking charm." How could they not. I love that sentence. I think they also get all perfumed up and thats why you see their chest fur feathers get all tussled and quilted, like a 70's disco dude unbutoning his silk medallion exposing shirt. Warblers, what can you do!? Lovely poem, Silent One. Login to Reply

Bill Baker Date: 2/20/2024 11:30:00 PM I enjoyed reading your contest entry for Tania's contest, Silent One. It's a good one, good luck! Bill Login to Reply

Paige Hind Date: 2/20/2024 1:01:00 PM This is lovely- you did the etheree very well. Login to Reply

Joseph May Date: 2/19/2024 7:41:00 PM Very nicely penned Silent, best wishes Login to Reply

Duke Beaufort Date: 2/19/2024 4:41:00 PM I'm taken to the scene (like being transported) and loved reading it. It is a strong impression. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 2/19/2024 3:39:00 PM You crested a lovely scene with the etheree form. One of the best ones I have seen in this contest Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 2/19/2024 2:21:00 PM It reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. I think we are all wanting spring to be here. Your visit to my page was encouraging. Sara K Login to Reply

Vijay Pandit Date: 2/19/2024 1:39:00 PM Wonderfully dwelling in sights and sounds of spring. A delightful poem, SO. Login to Reply

Ink Empress Date: 2/19/2024 11:46:00 AM Ah how gorgeous is this etheree i love it. So many flowers and so springy it is! I especially love the shape too that youv created with your lines. And how your imagery just flows seamlessly in such poetic eloquence is truly impressive and worth reading! I love the lines “ tulips with perfumed primrose on a green quilt. Basking in warmer weather,“ gorgeous! And i love the subtle use of alliterations too here! So creative! “ perched on branches—“ ending there is soulfully captivating! Fave it is Login to Reply

Sotto Poet Date: 2/19/2024 10:36:00 AM Your poem, dear SO, is incredibly evocative and metaphorical. It is a splendid piece of writing that conveys its message concisely. The gentle and haunting beauty of your poignant words deeply moves the heart and fills the soul, resonating with the profound emotions of nature that you express Login to Reply