Notes About The Poem

For Tania Kitchin's, A Spring Etheree poetry contest

 

Warblers Warble


Once dormant seeds bloom in white, red and pink tulips with perfumed primrose on a green quilt. Basking in warmer weather, warblers warble a sweet chorus, perched on branches with fresh verdant leaves, as nature revives its breath taking charm.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Kendrick Avatar
March 4, 2024 at 7:49 AM
I have read your winning work and found it to be very interesting. Congratulations!! Way to go. Sara K
Goldsmith Avatar
March 4, 2024 at 7:17 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your colorful/lovely Spring write. Spring will be here very soon with pretty flowers everywhere.... Have a wonderful day/week writing away..........
George Avatar
March 3, 2024 at 7:32 PM
Back to your beautiful poem, dear Silent One on your well-deserved first place win.
Kitchin Avatar
March 3, 2024 at 12:35 PM
Silent One, congratulations on your first place win with your sweet poem, I can hear the warblers!
George Avatar
February 24, 2024 at 10:33 PM
Tulips and primrose on a carpet of green and warblers warbling on tree tops of fresh verdant foliage. What a lovely scene you have painted! Beautiful etheree , dear Silent One
Herrick Avatar
February 24, 2024 at 8:12 AM
I tell you what, those warblers know how to bask their tail feathers off, with... "perched on branches with fresh verdant leaves, as nature revives its breath taking charm." How could they not. I love that sentence. I think they also get all perfumed up and thats why you see their chest fur feathers get all tussled and quilted, like a 70's disco dude unbutoning his silk medallion exposing shirt. Warblers, what can you do!? Lovely poem, Silent One.
Baker Avatar
February 20, 2024 at 11:30 PM
I enjoyed reading your contest entry for Tania's contest, Silent One. It's a good one, good luck! Bill
Hind Avatar
February 20, 2024 at 1:01 PM
This is lovely- you did the etheree very well.
May Avatar
February 19, 2024 at 7:41 PM
Very nicely penned Silent, best wishes
Beaufort Avatar
February 19, 2024 at 4:41 PM
I'm taken to the scene (like being transported) and loved reading it. It is a strong impression.
Dietrich Avatar
February 19, 2024 at 3:39 PM
You crested a lovely scene with the etheree form. One of the best ones I have seen in this contest
Kendrick Avatar
February 19, 2024 at 2:21 PM
It reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. I think we are all wanting spring to be here. Your visit to my page was encouraging. Sara K
Pandit Avatar
February 19, 2024 at 1:39 PM
Wonderfully dwelling in sights and sounds of spring. A delightful poem, SO.
Empress Avatar
February 19, 2024 at 11:46 AM
Ah how gorgeous is this etheree i love it. So many flowers and so springy it is! I especially love the shape too that youv created with your lines. And how your imagery just flows seamlessly in such poetic eloquence is truly impressive and worth reading! I love the lines “ tulips with perfumed primrose on a green quilt. Basking in warmer weather,“ gorgeous! And i love the subtle use of alliterations too here! So creative! “ perched on branches—“ ending there is soulfully captivating! Fave it is
Poet Avatar
February 19, 2024 at 10:36 AM
Your poem, dear SO, is incredibly evocative and metaphorical. It is a splendid piece of writing that conveys its message concisely. The gentle and haunting beauty of your poignant words deeply moves the heart and fills the soul, resonating with the profound emotions of nature that you express
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace