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For Tania Kitchin's, A Spring Etheree poetry contest

Once dormant seeds bloom in white, red and pink tulips with perfumed primrose on a green quilt. Basking in warmer weather, warblers warble a sweet chorus, perched on branches with fresh verdant leaves, as nature revives its breath taking charm.

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/4/2024 7:49:00 AM

I have read your winning work and found it to be very interesting. Congratulations!! Way to go. Sara K

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/4/2024 7:17:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your colorful/lovely Spring write. Spring will be here very soon with pretty flowers everywhere.... Have a wonderful day/week writing away..........

Valsa George

Date: 3/3/2024 7:32:00 PM

Back to your beautiful poem, dear Silent One on your well-deserved first place win.

Tania Kitchin

Date: 3/3/2024 12:35:00 PM

Silent One, congratulations on your first place win with your sweet poem, I can hear the warblers!

Valsa George

Date: 2/24/2024 10:33:00 PM

Tulips and primrose on a carpet of green and warblers warbling on tree tops of fresh verdant foliage. What a lovely scene you have painted! Beautiful etheree , dear Silent One

Jude Herrick

Date: 2/24/2024 8:12:00 AM

I tell you what, those warblers know how to bask their tail feathers off, with... "perched on branches with fresh verdant leaves, as nature revives its breath taking charm." How could they not. I love that sentence. I think they also get all perfumed up and thats why you see their chest fur feathers get all tussled and quilted, like a 70's disco dude unbutoning his silk medallion exposing shirt. Warblers, what can you do!? Lovely poem, Silent One.

Bill Baker

Date: 2/20/2024 11:30:00 PM

I enjoyed reading your contest entry for Tania's contest, Silent One. It's a good one, good luck! Bill

Paige Hind

Date: 2/20/2024 1:01:00 PM

This is lovely- you did the etheree very well.

Joseph May

Date: 2/19/2024 7:41:00 PM

Very nicely penned Silent, best wishes

Duke Beaufort

Date: 2/19/2024 4:41:00 PM

I'm taken to the scene (like being transported) and loved reading it. It is a strong impression.

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 2/19/2024 3:39:00 PM

just a delightful read. You've captured the essence of spring--the tulips and the warblers. Our tulips are in full bloom...no warblers but woodpeckers and little birds called 'chi-chis' who provided a morning chorus. Anyway, I enjoyed your Etheree. Nicely done, have a great evening, Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/19/2024 3:39:00 PM

You crested a lovely scene with the etheree form. One of the best ones I have seen in this contest

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/19/2024 2:21:00 PM

It reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. I think we are all wanting spring to be here. Your visit to my page was encouraging. Sara K

Vijay Pandit

Date: 2/19/2024 1:39:00 PM

Wonderfully dwelling in sights and sounds of spring. A delightful poem, SO.

Ink Empress

Date: 2/19/2024 11:46:00 AM

Ah how gorgeous is this etheree i love it. So many flowers and so springy it is! I especially love the shape too that youv created with your lines. And how your imagery just flows seamlessly in such poetic eloquence is truly impressive and worth reading! I love the lines “ tulips with perfumed primrose on a green quilt. Basking in warmer weather,“ gorgeous! And i love the subtle use of alliterations too here! So creative! “ perched on branches—“ ending there is soulfully captivating! Fave it is

Sotto Poet

Date: 2/19/2024 10:36:00 AM

Your poem, dear SO, is incredibly evocative and metaphorical. It is a splendid piece of writing that conveys its message concisely. The gentle and haunting beauty of your poignant words deeply moves the heart and fills the soul, resonating with the profound emotions of nature that you express