War Widows

She walked alone, no one was there
No spring she had within each step
She walked as if she did not care
And while she walked she also wept
She wept not for lack of romance
She wept not for being in pain
It was for the men lost in France
And for the ones buried in Spain
She wanted love, to do the dance
Many a young maid, unfulfilled
A war widow without the chance
Broken within, her wishes chilled
Now old and bent, too many years
Carrying the weight of those tears

© Oct 19 2010  Charles Henderson
    2 nd in  John's "sonnet" contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
June 2, 2011 at 5:40 AM
Congrats on your well deserved win in Poet Destroyer's contest Charles. Love, Carol
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June 2, 2011 at 12:38 AM
grats on your awesome contest entry Luv*Skat
A   Avatar
June 1, 2011 at 5:33 PM
Charles!~ CONGRATULATIONS!! with your poem in my old entry contest:-) Thank you very much for supporting my awesome contest. I had so much fun reading each and every entry. I'm glad you where among all my chosen winners. Keep posting your good poems,..p.d.
Mehta Avatar
June 1, 2011 at 2:10 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of P.d., Charles
Sweetheart Avatar
June 1, 2011 at 1:26 PM
congrats Charles on another exciting win in old poem contest ..with this nicely penned creation luv..enjoy another victory...
Beesley Avatar
December 29, 2010 at 11:25 AM
good dedication read "staig 42"
Muzzey Avatar
October 30, 2010 at 8:37 AM
Congratulations on your second place win with this wonderful Sonnet. Caryl
Kendrick Avatar
October 28, 2010 at 3:56 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
Guzzi Avatar
October 27, 2010 at 3:39 PM
Debbie's #1 GREAT as always and nice to see you walking your own walk, even I played to the audience ;) You're the man! (You ever get me that dialect poem!???) Light & Love
Brown Avatar
October 27, 2010 at 10:58 AM
Congratulations Charles on your win in John Freeman's Sonnet contest. Love, Carol
K. Avatar
October 27, 2010 at 10:23 AM
Wow, this sure was a moving sonnet that had a wonderful flow to it as well-- I really liked this Charles-- super congrats on your win :)-- nikko :)
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October 27, 2010 at 7:09 AM
Very nice Charles...no errors in syllable count that I can find...lol...congrats to you...BG
Horsman Avatar
October 27, 2010 at 12:12 AM
liked this first time around, Charles, congrats for your win in the contest. Harry
Mehta Avatar
October 26, 2010 at 6:15 PM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, Charles
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October 26, 2010 at 5:59 PM
There are so many of these women (and their children) who suffer from the loss of a soldier fighting for a cause. Blessings to you for sharing this moving sonnet and reminding us that these ladies deserve our support as they carry the weight of "those tears." Wonderful sonnet, Charles. Congratulations on your big win! Love, Carolyn
Sweetheart Avatar
October 26, 2010 at 5:32 PM
Congrats Charles on your super win in Moses contest ith this excellent entry luv.. a fantastic piece .. enjoy your sweet victory tonight luv..
Johnson Avatar
October 26, 2010 at 5:31 PM
Too many war widows both old and young. Well done and congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
Freeman Avatar
October 26, 2010 at 5:02 PM
I loved your "War Widows" at the top honor of placement Charles. "Congratulations" Agape, Moses
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October 21, 2010 at 3:12 AM
Very well written poem. It focuses on a sad part of the life of this world. How do they do it? How do they manage with such pain?
Horsman Avatar
October 21, 2010 at 2:25 AM
Excellent form of poetry, complemented with this wonderful poem, Charles. Harry
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October 21, 2010 at 12:40 AM
Sad poem very well-versed. I liked reading it. Taha
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October 20, 2010 at 2:03 PM
It's so sad when a soldier dies, his faithful widow dies each day no matter how hard she tries to live..but one day, as John commented below, there will be no more pain and no more tears..they will all be reunited in the Light. I've read many inspiring poems today Charles, and this is one of them. Blessings, love, Audrey
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October 20, 2010 at 12:13 PM
Smile? ~ "Yes," the sorrows of war; torn hearts; broken worlds; widows & widowers; children that become orphans; all waiting upon the very last war to end All wars; no more tears, no more pain, no more, death; can't wait....Smile, "What A Glorious Day; 'The Fourth of July' for, 'The Children of God!!!'" ~ "Tender Loving Poe Charles; Sad But Sweet" ~ "Love & Warmth to You & Yours," John!:) ~
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October 20, 2010 at 12:01 PM
sad thoughts, well portrayed works.
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