War Widows

She walked alone, no one was there
No spring she had within each step
She walked as if she did not care
And while she walked she also wept
She wept not for lack of romance
She wept not for being in pain
It was for the men lost in France
And for the ones buried in Spain
She wanted love, to do the dance
Many a young maid, unfulfilled
A war widow without the chance
Broken within, her wishes chilled
Now old and bent, too many years
Carrying the weight of those tears

© Oct 19 2010  Charles Henderson
    2 nd in  John's "sonnet" contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 6/2/2011 5:40:00 AM
Congrats on your well deserved win in Poet Destroyer's contest Charles. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/2/2011 12:38:00 AM
grats on your awesome contest entry Luv*Skat
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Date: 6/1/2011 5:33:00 PM
Charles!~ CONGRATULATIONS!! with your poem in my old entry contest:-) Thank you very much for supporting my awesome contest. I had so much fun reading each and every entry. I'm glad you where among all my chosen winners. Keep posting your good poems,..p.d.
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Date: 6/1/2011 2:10:00 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of P.d., Charles
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Date: 6/1/2011 1:26:00 PM
congrats Charles on another exciting win in old poem contest ..with this nicely penned creation luv..enjoy another victory...
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Date: 12/29/2010 11:25:00 AM
good dedication read "staig 42"
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Date: 10/30/2010 8:37:00 AM
Congratulations on your second place win with this wonderful Sonnet. Caryl
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Date: 10/28/2010 3:56:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 10/27/2010 3:39:00 PM
Debbie's #1 GREAT as always and nice to see you walking your own walk, even I played to the audience ;) You're the man! (You ever get me that dialect poem!???) Light & Love
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Date: 10/27/2010 10:58:00 AM
Congratulations Charles on your win in John Freeman's Sonnet contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/27/2010 10:23:00 AM
Wow, this sure was a moving sonnet that had a wonderful flow to it as well-- I really liked this Charles-- super congrats on your win :)-- nikko :)
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Date: 10/27/2010 7:09:00 AM
Very nice Charles...no errors in syllable count that I can find...lol...congrats to you...BG
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Date: 10/27/2010 12:12:00 AM
liked this first time around, Charles, congrats for your win in the contest. Harry
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Date: 10/26/2010 6:15:00 PM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, Charles
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Date: 10/26/2010 5:59:00 PM
There are so many of these women (and their children) who suffer from the loss of a soldier fighting for a cause. Blessings to you for sharing this moving sonnet and reminding us that these ladies deserve our support as they carry the weight of "those tears." Wonderful sonnet, Charles. Congratulations on your big win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/26/2010 5:32:00 PM
Congrats Charles on your super win in Moses contest ith this excellent entry luv.. a fantastic piece .. enjoy your sweet victory tonight luv..
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Date: 10/26/2010 5:31:00 PM
Too many war widows both old and young. Well done and congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 10/26/2010 5:02:00 PM
I loved your "War Widows" at the top honor of placement Charles. "Congratulations" Agape, Moses
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Date: 10/21/2010 3:12:00 AM
Very well written poem. It focuses on a sad part of the life of this world. How do they do it? How do they manage with such pain?
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Date: 10/21/2010 2:25:00 AM
Excellent form of poetry, complemented with this wonderful poem, Charles. Harry
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Date: 10/21/2010 12:40:00 AM
Sad poem very well-versed. I liked reading it. Taha
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Date: 10/20/2010 2:03:00 PM
It's so sad when a soldier dies, his faithful widow dies each day no matter how hard she tries to live..but one day, as John commented below, there will be no more pain and no more tears..they will all be reunited in the Light. I've read many inspiring poems today Charles, and this is one of them. Blessings, love, Audrey
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Date: 10/20/2010 12:13:00 PM
Smile? ~ "Yes," the sorrows of war; torn hearts; broken worlds; widows & widowers; children that become orphans; all waiting upon the very last war to end All wars; no more tears, no more pain, no more, death; can't wait....Smile, "What A Glorious Day; 'The Fourth of July' for, 'The Children of God!!!'" ~ "Tender Loving Poe Charles; Sad But Sweet" ~ "Love & Warmth to You & Yours," John!:) ~
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Date: 10/20/2010 12:01:00 PM
sad thoughts, well portrayed works.
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