War Song

I wake up in this fine old house
The quietus resides
The silence, almost tangible
Its pulse is almost palatable 

It's time to watch the rising sun
Another day to feel the gulf
that lies between a world undone
and one I keep inside

While reaching for my coffee cup, 
I'll hold the warmth against my breast
as if it were my closest friend

I step down from the old screen porch, 
so grateful for the dulcet sounds  
The morning sun is still the same 
as it filters through the lodge pole pines

The breezes play that war song.  Old heartaches still unwind
The lyrics have not changed at all 
they ring with words I cannot bear 
Some stanzas seem too fathomless to shed another tear
The questions they are asking, are the lyrics we have heard
This song has played a thousand years, too many to recall

Why must there be another war?   And why so many scars?
Why can't we play a song of love that treasures all mankind?

Another day to feel the gulf
that lies between a world undone
and one I keep inside myself,…before the two collide...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gauthier Avatar
April 9, 2018 at 11:03 PM
Congrats on your podium finish, Carrie, with this marvelous poem. Well done.
La France Avatar
April 2, 2018 at 6:00 PM
Carrie, congratulations on your win in my contest with this emotional and wonderfully penned poem, I felt like I was with you asking the Lord why . . .
Sands Avatar
April 1, 2018 at 9:36 AM
Very well expressed. Congratulations for your win :)
Talbot Avatar
April 1, 2018 at 2:59 AM
Congratulations Carrie, a question I often ask, heartwrenching! Mick
Sergi Avatar
March 30, 2018 at 3:34 PM
Such beautiful rhythms, Carrie! Iam in awe!
Rodrigues Avatar
March 29, 2018 at 12:12 PM
A fave, Carrie! Love the shape and all! GL in contest!
One Avatar
March 29, 2018 at 9:06 AM
A deep reflective poem Carrie, you used the five words very well..
Turner Avatar
March 29, 2018 at 12:32 AM
Mrs Carrie,this poem has a wonderful spiritual vibe. My daddy always said if we knew all of the answers there would be no need for faith. It is how we are tested. i struggle with that "faith" thing myself. i figure, if I live the best i can according to his teachings, even if there is no heaven or hell, i will still have a fulfilling and happy life.I love the poem!
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March 28, 2018 at 11:34 PM
Lovely, Carrie. Beautifully done.
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