War Horse

Brumby.

A strong gale cuts its path across the snow laden mountain tops,
light and tough the timor, thoroughbred mix, leads his mob at a trot.
A day spend grazing the valley below they now ascend the range above,
his brumbys follow out of awe and fear not with any love.
Echoing through the gullies is the thunderous clap of a stock whip,
in pursuit of the mob the mountain horseman cut a mean pace at a clip.
Coming up on the brumbys, surrounded them their lariat ropes are let loose,
the stallion is caught for the first time in his life his neck feels the noose.

In 1897 born to tough stock, I think Steve was his name,
His family raised cattle by Corryong of Snowy River fame.
Riding before he could walk, in the saddle he would ply his trade.
Catching brumbys on Kosciuszko's slopes for a little money to be made.
He made the high plains and steep valleys his primary domain,
believed that this was his home, in the hills he would ever remain.
Word reached his ears of the great war in Europe from a close friend.
with fear of threat to king and country, to enlist his mind would bend.

The noble thoroughbred steed, king of his country was finally tamed.
Saddled and bridled, freedom lost, and now he was named.
Garnished with weapons of war to a new mob he was placed,
rigorously put through his training in readiness for battle to be faced.
Somehow he sensed the young man on his back was of similar ilk,
rode low in the saddle, moved with ease, yes they drank the same milk.
A bond was formed, a friendship even, between man and his stallion,
Although both small they rode tall as though kings of the battalion. 

Unloading in Palestine the hot sandy desert now their new home,
a far cry from the lofty peaks and steep valleys they both would roam.
This tough little man and horse to new environs would quickly aclime,
strutting across the dunes, a fine stance cut and looking sublime.
The bugle calls out a mighty charge on Beersheba they began to lay,
horse flaring his nostrils , galloping wildly, into battle making their way.
Flying over the trenches the young man with his bayonette swinging true,
horse compensating expertly as the enemy lines are burst through.

In the heat of the battle cannon fire starts to rupture the ears,
the young man and his horse are finally realising their fears.
A solitary rifle round pulls young Steve from the saddle of his panting steed,
the horse pulls up fast, spinning around, recognising the riders need.
A mortar fatally reaching its mark, puts the poor brumby to the ground,
man and horse mortally wounded, dying without making much of a sound.
In the hot sandy desert final memories flood through their whole being,
and long lonely valleys with snow covered peaks, the last thing they were seeing.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Cresswell Avatar
October 24, 2017 at 12:47 PM
This is a tale of great anger and sadness for me because neither should have been there. They were brave and full of life murderes for some disinterested parties gain. You have written a fine tale it is just my bent of mind that sees sadness and waste.
Lindley Avatar
October 11, 2017 at 1:25 PM
This is a truly exceptional creation! I loved every verse and the fine tale as it unfolded.... Huge double bravo on this great ballad .. Automatic fav for me.. Thanks...
Emu Avatar
October 14, 2017 at 4:43 PM
Thank you Robert for your kindly visit.
Buck Avatar
April 23, 2016 at 7:02 PM
Craig: Now I'm understanding where all this humor is coming from. I've never read an Aussie rhyme that didn't make me laugh. Thanks for sharing your bit of that same thing. oldbuck
Emu Avatar
April 23, 2016 at 10:01 PM
No problem. Buck. I shall make a visit to your work, If like the last I read I will not be disappointed.
George   Avatar
February 28, 2016 at 5:29 PM
Heart felt, Craig. Great writing, Elaine
Emu Avatar
February 29, 2016 at 1:41 PM
Thank you for visiting Elaine. Cheers Craig
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 17, 2016 at 5:21 PM
Craig, what a magnificent poem you have created! It is so sad the great number of horses sacrificed for the sake of war.
Emu Avatar
February 17, 2016 at 9:46 PM
It is sad, over 13,000 horses were sent from Australia in WW1 only one horse was repatriated. Thanks for visiting
A   Avatar
February 6, 2016 at 1:03 PM
Welcome for the reply
A   Avatar
February 5, 2016 at 3:54 PM
CRAIG, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. Always with LUV ** LINDA
Emu Avatar
February 6, 2016 at 1:02 PM
Thank you Linda for your kind words.
Bickerstaffe Avatar
February 3, 2016 at 12:37 PM
Outstanding! Such wonderful language and blistering imagery. There are far too many memorable phrases to single out one or even a few... A splendid piece!!! Best wishes, Keith
Emu Avatar
February 3, 2016 at 8:32 PM
Hi Keith, thanks for your kind review. enjoyed writing it. Cheers, Craig
Kendrick Avatar
January 31, 2016 at 1:28 PM
Interesting work..Very detailed..Sara
Emu Avatar
February 1, 2016 at 3:06 AM
Thanks for taking the time. I know its a bit long
Delaney Avatar
January 30, 2016 at 9:14 PM
This is so sad Craig: I have a thing for war horses too. I wrote one called, "Lest We Forget the Horses" Enjoyed reading your epic about Brumby. SuZ
Emu Avatar
January 30, 2016 at 9:45 PM
Thanks, I will definitely read it.
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