War Heroes

War Heroes
 
Between black wheel tarmac
the crossing reflects a figure in polished paint
at the stagger of his old loose feet
crosses the barrier of traffic
with the beacons conversation meaning nothing 
its flashing occupation signals his lolled neck stumbling
sucks the bottle for one last time
and forgets
 
Sighting on blurred reactions
sipping the spit of his dribble he stares at his daughter mannequin 
wincing past his performance
begging her to listen
while her attention is fixed ahead
the traffic rolls slick full of monoxide toxic
breathes the waste of her distress
she ignores the principal wave of his bottle
releasing her breath with the clutch
the zebra smells like a mouse trap
the white ladder bars and black adder cars
bump pristine edges on his boots
he sways across
 
The market trolleys squeak echoes the ache
she steps on tender ankles
swollen while he eases her past the cardboard
the plastic bags of her life  crammed to full
the tatters of memories
she  thinks of china cups and lost children
on blazing streets that lived on rations
 
Some where in her mind he is a hero
medals adorning his battered uniform
the traffic roars as loud as the blitz 
some where in his mind he sees her yellow skin 
the gunpowder struggle and the munitions factory 
have worn away her beauty but still her eyes are sweet and lovely
and the traffic blasts like the blitz
on the people they were before

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 7/3/2009 3:57:00 AM
Congratulations on being featured this week, Colin. (Soup Mail)
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Date: 6/30/2009 3:42:00 PM
"...sucks the bottle for one last time / and forgets", "...the traffic rolls slick full of monoxide toxic / breathes the waste of her distress...", "...the white ladder bars and black adder cars" Damn, that's brilliant. Congrats on your feature. This piece is long deserved of it.
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Date: 6/29/2009 3:16:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week Colin. May you have many more.Love, Carol
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Date: 6/29/2009 2:47:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured. "she thinks of china cups and lost children on blazing streets that lived on rations" Poetry to my ears you are a talent my friend
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Date: 6/29/2009 12:40:00 AM
This is awesome and wonderful. Congratulations. I have also a featured poetry this week. Gpd bless. Ernilando
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Date: 5/25/2009 9:36:00 AM
"The cardboard ... plastic bags of her life craffed too full" says so much, Colin. I was searching for "Heroes," but I think this is the poem to which you referred as it does indeed remind me of the message in mine about Annie Lesley. Annie lived next door for a while. I was probably her only visitor and she only took to me because I liked her cat. The way she died was so sad. I still cry when I think how society abandons the elderly who have made sacrifices. Thanks for sharing. Love, CD
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