War Games

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As it unfolds, labeled cold, a wall confines the innocent
It looms of iron, bricks, where stones
are thrown and rifles aimed 
to claim the hopes of those intent
to breech the sniper's scope

Risks are grave, if they should fail
and graves mound high, among the brave  

Outrage cries, games commence -  incident or accident
the game of spies, U know why-- a U-2 flies
against the grain of do or die  
A chessboard filled with stakes so high,
they may enrage a fist to rise in wars against democracy

Labeled cold, …but hot as hell
pawns are played, and deals are made
Men sit alone within a cell, restrained, until a deal is tossed 

Lines are crossed, a bridge is crossed, and breaths are held
for lives of men.   Like ransomed gold
they are played, and waged as if a game of chess, 
where consequence is life or death 

     and peace depends on games of chance



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2/25/16  Inspired by Contest: "Pick a Theme: Bridge of Spies"
Sponsor: Craig Cornish
Resubmitted For PD's contest: 
100 in a ROW contest -- 11 PREMIERE number 2Poetry Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 9/4/2016 6:12:00 PM
Carrie, such a gift you hold dear lady...congrats on your placement! :)-luloo
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Date: 8/20/2016 12:31:00 AM
War is such a tragedy....congrats on your win with these wonderful write. :) Sunita
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Date: 8/18/2016 7:30:00 PM
Carrie, Congratulations on your awesome win. Stop by my blog "Don't Come" if you'd like. Enjoy your win. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 8/18/2016 7:21:00 PM
I like your War Games very much, Carrie. If I may note, Chess is a game of thoughtful, strategic moves -- not a game of chance.... :-)
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Date: 3/24/2016 8:57:00 AM
Hi Carrie. Congrats on your top placement in the contest!!! ;-)
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Date: 3/22/2016 10:08:00 PM
This is excellent Carrie! Very deserving congratulations my friend! #7 ;)
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Date: 3/22/2016 9:49:00 PM
Great write Carrie, technically brilliant, but foe that extra step into the dirt and panic, n you had a winner...well done....Ian
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Date: 3/22/2016 4:51:00 PM
I thought the theme of War Games was a good approach. Yours was much better than mine, Carrie. Congratulations.
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Date: 3/22/2016 4:20:00 PM
Carrie, congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo
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Date: 3/22/2016 3:51:00 PM
Very well done! Grats on second! Hard contest... you rocked it!
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Date: 3/6/2016 5:41:00 PM
Terrific writing Carrie!
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Date: 2/27/2016 12:27:00 PM
This is very rich in its portent and acerbic in its thrust. So well done!
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Date: 2/25/2016 4:12:00 PM
This is such a good piece of writing Carrie! I was practically mesmerized the whole way through. The way you organized your descriptive words and analogies was very cool. Good luck it looks like another winner in your long list of them
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Date: 2/25/2016 5:58:00 PM
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