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War Far Away

We wallow in the news of rapacious war,
Glad it is so far away, thank God!
But dare we ask: why do wanton warriors fight?
Like wild wasps out on an ill-fated foray,
sting like hell in the soporific summer sun.

The terrific, fierce fight goes on,
like some wild cat that smells an invader
in its blitzed up tribal territory.
Thunder and earthquakes 
as bombs fall on either side
distant rumblings killing prerequisite peace.

A crumbling city deprived of vital hope,
bereft of electricity and nutritious food,
while innocent frightened children 
writhe on fragmented pavements 
of deserted, stifled streets.

Their fault is they are born 
on the wrong side of earth from where arms originate.
The bloody fight goes on and on,
soldiers wildly staring, fearful and bewildered.
Both sides know only one answer:
They fight for fear 
but underneath hate reigns supreme.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Daniel Avatar
June 13, 2021 at 10:29 PM
It's really bad that war takes place, you have written a powerful poem, Victor:)
Kendrick Avatar
June 13, 2021 at 1:06 PM
It is sad that there is still war but we can't end until the Prince Of Peace comes to reign and that hasn't happened yet. I think soon though. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
Rodrigues Avatar
June 13, 2021 at 11:48 AM
Those last three lines create a world where children roam war-torn streets.
Edmonds  Avatar
June 13, 2021 at 8:23 AM
Imagine living with the atrocities of war, those killed, injured and children left without home or parents. It’s a wicked world, will it ever change, I very much doubt it. Well said in your excellent free verse Victor… Belle
Seeker Avatar
June 13, 2021 at 8:21 AM
Love crucified again & again, from the days of Jesus, what has changed?
Rose  Avatar
June 13, 2021 at 4:44 AM
We are fortunate where we live, and at times we take it for granted. If we lived amongst that kind of hatred it would change us and make us realize, how privileged we were and are, thank you for always standing on the side of humanity with your beautiful poems dear Victor: )
Horsman Avatar
June 13, 2021 at 1:40 AM
Since the dawn of time, it seems so Victor. always a small minority yet so many suffer. Excellent poem.
Y. Avatar
June 12, 2021 at 8:27 PM
Hi Victor, I agree with what Tom said. Hate fuels war. You penned a well written write my friend. Enjoy the rest of your weekend:-) Alexis
Ball Avatar
June 12, 2021 at 6:53 PM
So much confusion and hatred and suffering. A fine write my friend. God Bless, JB
Roper Avatar
June 12, 2021 at 6:34 PM
They fight for something. Some for freedom others to take what is not theirs. How many innocent people are murder? Great write, Victor. Hugs Eve
Buehler Avatar
June 12, 2021 at 4:07 PM
There is no good reason why the horrors of war should be unleashed-only bad ones. Your wonderful poem carries a powerful and meaningful message, Victor. Blessings, Evelyn
Cunningham Avatar
June 12, 2021 at 2:37 PM
Powerful verse Victor, hate fuels war and there are no winners and its the innocent who suffer. Tom
Pandit Avatar
June 12, 2021 at 1:58 PM
Destruction stems from hate as you so aptly illustrate Victor. Religion, economic disparities flare up differences everywhere in the world. A meaningful message resonates in this splendid poem.
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