War Drums

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war drums pounding dirge `peace, peace, when there is no peace' quicksilver madness 6/20/2022 Based on Jeremiah 6:14 Image created by Mark Toney on canva.com using iOS Big Sur Wallpaper

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Paghunda Zahid

Date: 7/26/2022 3:42:00 AM

Earth is in dire need of peace... Very well penned senryu

Mark Toney
Date: 7/26/2022 9:08:00 AM

Thank you so much, Paghunda.

I Am Anaya

Date: 7/1/2022 7:58:00 PM

Where is the cure? 100.1 degrees Fahrenheit, stage two Quicksilver! No rest for the wicked comes to mind, or perhaps a tongue of quicksilver and a mind of quicksand ! Excellent book cover design, Mark. ~Anayalator!

Mark Toney
Date: 7/2/2022 4:29:00 PM

Great comment, Anayalator!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/22/2022 11:40:00 PM

Love this, Mark. Great last line!

Mark Toney
Date: 6/23/2022 6:06:00 AM

Much appreciated, Andrea!