War Cry

World's troubles reflected in a dark sky Days and nights now blurred fears quantify My ears pick up artillery in war cry Depression rolls in I try to deny All my thoughts grow befuddled I belie Tears held in so many puddles I cry Emotions all muddled up in deep sighs My eyes hollow my heart beats amplify On divine intervention I rely! 2.11.22 Contest Name: Monomixorhyme Sponsor: Hilo Poet

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Joe Dimino

Date: 11/3/2022 8:41:00 PM

Your poem clearly expresses the raging sorrows of war. Well said. I pray with you for peaceful intervention. Blessings.

Carol Mitra
Date: 11/4/2022 9:58:00 AM

Yes Joe War is devastating and leaves lives in shreds.... I pray for victims of war and the ones who suffer and are maimed physically and mentally.....All our prayers be answered.... Thank you :)

Sam Kauffman

Date: 11/3/2022 11:00:00 AM

Carol, truly God is large and in charge and we are blessed by the very best. Hard to see that sometimes through the vale of tears and chaos of this world but once again you have opened up that gate to hope through prayer - through our merciful God. Best wishes for the contest. Blessings!

Carol Mitra
Date: 11/3/2022 7:47:00 PM

Hello dear Sam..... Hope is that little light within us that can never be put out and faith helps it burn steadly through.... Thank you for reading my poem, much love and blessings :)

Reason A. Poteet

Date: 11/2/2022 10:33:00 AM

Carol, I like your summary line. You spotlight so many troubles but give the one solution which will ease every single one. Great example of the new mono-rhyme form.

Carol Mitra
Date: 11/3/2022 1:14:00 AM

Thank you and much appreciated dear poet.