war and peace
it's hard and heavy the light is dim
what was supposed to be a sanctuary
is suffocating.
the soldier has fought and thrashed
and given his breathes
it's hard and heavy the light is dim
the fight is over
the soldier doesn't want to be in.
thus he wins ?
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