Craig Hawkins Poet Rhyme

War

Will there be a World war three, maybe
Wish all the power men would stop being cry babies
Talking is the only way to stop this fight
Ranting through the TV’s just isn’t right

Every day something new
More bad news to look through
People in their homes frightened for their lives
While the power men give each other high fives

We as a people need to stand tall
Tell the power men what they can do with their “walls”
We need to cancel this TV show
And watch them destroy all of their ammo

Once and for all please stop these childish games
Stop pointing fingers, you are all to blame
Sit around the table and reason with sense
Instead of standing there with your guns on the offense

Finished 5th place in Best Rhyming poem July-September 2017, sponsored by John Hamilton 1/10/17

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John Hamilton October 2, 2017 at 11:34 PM Nice write Craig, sorry for the delayed comment, enjoyed it, congrats on a fine placement! Craig Hawkins October 3, 2017 at 2:49 AM Thanks John, I was entering competitions and losing all hope by getting constant n/a's...thanks again

Susan Ashley October 2, 2017 at 5:23 PM True enough Craig. A beautiful and timely write. Congratulations on your win! Craig Hawkins October 3, 2017 at 2:50 AM thanks for you comment x

Constance La France October 2, 2017 at 3:16 PM Craig, CONGRATULATIONS on your win ! Craig Hawkins October 2, 2017 at 3:22 PM Thanks x

Venetia Crasta September 29, 2017 at 7:59 AM how true Craig Hawkins October 2, 2017 at 3:06 AM thank you so much for your comment, If only the so called power men in the world would listen to it....