War

The war starts young, unequally dividing me
There are always casualties in war, I pray I'm not next
A force pushes me here, pulls me there-
Am I alive?
I must be, the war is still raging on


Lightening flashes and I feel the cold of darkness enclose around me
The devil screams obscenities at me begging me to join his side
I keep my head bowed low, hiding my innocent eyes from corruption


The lies continue until I am deaf
The words don't matter any more
Only what I choose to see is what I believe
The guns fire on and I'm alone, abandoned


They forgot me... 
As I lay ready to die I raise my head
and allow my eyes to take in all they can
I die proud, alone, and corrupt
There are always casualties in war

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 4/8/2015 1:32:00 PM
Hi Logan, once again this poem is deep, war comes from many places, one is deeper than most far places... PS... Thank you for the sweet reply to my comment. Love LINDA
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Date: 4/5/2015 9:37:00 PM
Logan :) Congratulations!! <3 you are one of the poetry soups Top and Hottest Poet, -this month. I hope you enjoyed Your Easter Weekend PLUS, Your name on the featured page of the ~Best New Poet~ Enjoy the coming week. Love LINDA
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Date: 4/7/2015 8:11:00 AM
Thank you! That really means a lot to me Linda! (:
Date: 4/2/2015 11:47:00 AM
"Only what I choose to see is what I believe" There is so much truth in this one line. It is part of the human psyche to be willfully blind. Nice write on a painful subject. ~Janet
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