Want All of You

We walk in fluid nature of our own romantic sighs, 
dancing with the rhythm of the night.

Stuck inside a dream,
a victim of the moaning sea
the things we could do you and me tonight.

The air I breathe,
I hunger 
in bed of diamonds wisp heavens clouds
caused by your ambience;
waves of deep vibrant royal blue
in the galaxy of love holding tight.
You make me do anything you want
in surroundings enchanted silently  creeping through.
Striking in a twilight blue silk like the night
fitting perfectly against your legs with grace,
your slight curves quite an exquisitely beautiful,
a riot of long hair against your sun kissed form.

Every time you gently kiss my face
I unfurl the substance in my soul 
and nuzzle into your neck
then taste your lips once again.
I want to wake up in your embrace
breathless wanting more.
Enchantment rhythm of romance 
blending in slow dance in my heart; 
you're my beginning you're my end. 
I love you with all my heart 
as I lose myself in you 
caught in the lace work of your love.

2/11/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Pandit Avatar
March 17, 2020 at 7:14 AM
Back a third time to offer BIG congrats on another #1 win, Eve.
Gauthier Avatar
March 6, 2018 at 9:51 PM
Congrats on your winning poem, Eve.
Elisha Avatar
March 2, 2018 at 6:25 AM
Aaaawwwnnn....this is awesome.
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 26, 2018 at 11:45 PM
Memories of a song I love..."Rhythm Of The Night." Your poem exudes romance Eve. Very lovely! Congratulations on your wonderful Placement! ; )
Raven Avatar
February 26, 2018 at 6:56 PM
Hi Eve, Congratulations on your first place win with this excellent piece of poetry. As always, words of love flow gently from your pen. A joy to read this piece Eve. Have a wonderful Tuesday. Hugs....Mike. XX
Haight Avatar
February 26, 2018 at 3:02 PM
So happy to read your lovely poem again Eve! Congratulations on another First Place win in the contest! Hugs, Sandra
Wolf Avatar
February 26, 2018 at 11:29 AM
A perfect love eloquently described - - without beginning or end, a fluid circle. Round and round we go..."Breathless wanting more," as you put it. Unbelievable almost, but true: I closed my eyes for a sec, and your poem was the basis for the feature ride in a "Love is All" theme park. A dream? --Who knows? Eve: Congrats on a wonderful trophy win! :) Gershon
Cunningham Avatar
February 26, 2018 at 10:51 AM
Congratulations on your win Eve. Tom
Scars Avatar
February 26, 2018 at 5:28 AM
wow sweet Eve, I am not surprised to see your name under such a great poem! Beautiful and romantic, thank you and congrats : )-luloo
Imtiaz Avatar
February 24, 2018 at 12:47 PM
hi Eve this is no doubt an award deserving verse of love.......i like this all "Enchantment rhythm of romance blending in slow dance in my heart; you're my beginning you're my end. I lose myself in you, sweetheart."
Payton Avatar
February 14, 2018 at 9:01 PM
Eve you are wonderful, keep it up. Great poetess.
Haight Avatar
February 14, 2018 at 8:36 PM
So beautifully written, Eve. Congratulations on your First Place win! Hugs, Sandra
Williams Avatar
February 14, 2018 at 9:39 AM
Eve, congratulations on a lovely write and top-tier placement! Blessings to you. :) Bartholomew
Y. Avatar
February 14, 2018 at 12:52 AM
WoW! Eve, I found this write dreamy, passionate, sensual and very romantic. The imagery was lovely as well. Congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
Dietrich Avatar
February 13, 2018 at 5:49 PM
This part: a riot of long hair against your sun kissed form (and also the lines preceding it were so splendid). I see you won a contest with it, and deservedly so. I think I shall fave this wonderful poem.
S     Avatar
February 13, 2018 at 2:16 PM
Congratulation on this masterpiece Eve! Full of enchanting, romantic lines!! Best, Judy
Singh  Avatar
February 13, 2018 at 12:11 PM
So pleasing ....!
Cunningham Avatar
February 13, 2018 at 4:19 AM
Big congratulations Eve Regards Tom
Andresen Avatar
February 13, 2018 at 3:05 AM
- What's more beautiful than a poem of love, Eve :) - Congratulations on your wonderful poem - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gupta Avatar
February 13, 2018 at 2:48 AM
Congratulations, Eve on your first place ... A beautiful poem ...
Neumann Avatar
February 13, 2018 at 1:34 AM
Congratulations. That is so sweet and so beautifully written.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
February 12, 2018 at 11:26 PM
Congratulations, Eve on your first position win. The line .."I unfurl the substance in my soul" is so appealing.
Raynes Avatar
February 12, 2018 at 6:34 PM
congratulations Eve on ur top win, this was a beautiful read, thanks :)
Pandit Avatar
February 12, 2018 at 5:36 PM
Returning with congrats on your top win, Eve.
Parker Avatar
February 12, 2018 at 5:06 PM
Congratulations Eve on your win with such a romantic write
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