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Wandering Out At Sea

If the ship is sinking do you stay on it or do you get on a life boat an row away to be rescued but in this ocean their isn't any help available what so ever an your left with just endless rowing and no direction at all. How do you feel after you give in to the vast ocean an endless rowing? No doubt your mind would be tired of constant worry, so you stop rowing an lie on the boat wondering if you'll ever be rescued. You think back to all the people on that ship you left sinking wondering if you could of have done something to save them but you yourself were too selfish to even look back but the damage is done an now you must live with the guilt for the rest of your life. so you close your eyes an drift off to sleep to the motion of the sea but you suddenly awake realizing it was just a dream but in fact it wasn't a dream at all just your mind remembering and tears start to fall down your cheek knowing that you'll never be rescued as you endlessly drift out at sea. Then in the distant you hear the faint sound of a fog horn as you quickly look around to find nothing at all...

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Date: 6/15/2014 7:25:00 PM
Hi Victor, thank you for the comment on my comment. I'm stopping by to say hi, and thank you for reading one of my poems. Your newest Poetry Soup Friend... LINDA
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Date: 6/14/2014 12:50:00 PM
Hi, Victor, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT"
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Date: 6/13/2014 2:18:00 PM
Victor, welcome to Poetry Soup. I hope you will find much to encourage you on this site as you share your poetry with others who love to write. Please visit my poems when you are able. Many writers will comment on your poetry if you do the same. Best wishes.
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Victor Lopez
Date: 6/13/2014 6:11:00 PM
Thank you for the warm welcome :)
Date: 6/13/2014 11:41:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Victor :) - I choose your first very well written free verse - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Victor Lopez
Date: 6/13/2014 6:16:00 PM
Thank you as well for the warm welcome :)
Date: 6/13/2014 12:34:00 AM
Victor, Patience,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Victor Lopez
Date: 6/13/2014 6:22:00 PM
Thank you for the warm welcome :)

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