Valsa George Poet Limerick

Wandering Gaze

As she bent down unintended
The old man's lewd eyes descended
Stuck on the two round moon
Making him at once swoon
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Just fun, no offense intended!

Feb.22. 2023

Put your Best Limerick( Be Like Rico Leffanta)
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Andrea Dietrich March 13, 2023 at 4:36 PM Good job on this one, Valsa. Better to call it double moon! haha. congrats, dear.

Mike Bayles February 28, 2023 at 9:36 AM Very nice, Valsa.

Pashang Salehi February 26, 2023 at 2:44 PM That is so nice...

Stephan McBride February 24, 2023 at 7:43 AM Very funny poem , : )

Sara Kendrick February 23, 2023 at 5:57 AM Creative work!! Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

Yann Rolland February 22, 2023 at 11:10 PM this is kind of natural, thanks for the smile yann

Gershon Wolf February 22, 2023 at 6:56 PM Ha, ha! I don't think you've offended anyone here. Nice going, gw

Joseph P. DiMino February 22, 2023 at 4:06 PM I generally look away. There is a time and place for everything...never the time and place when my wife is standing next to me:) Only kidding. Fun read. Thank you.

Kim Rodrigues February 22, 2023 at 9:36 AM LOL…funny. Some people where low cut clothing and complain about a man’s gaze going lower than it ought…hmm. Still that same man is often looking anyway.

Victor Buhagiar February 22, 2023 at 7:05 AM Lovely limerick. Excellent. Hugs.

Sotto Poet February 22, 2023 at 6:50 AM Funny Limerick Valsa, thanks for the grin. Good luck with the contest.

David Kavanagh February 22, 2023 at 4:26 AM Oh Valsa you do know Rico would not be happy with your Limerick, why! Because you haven’t embedded a photo of the spectacle, Tut Tut! Good fun write. Cheers David Valsa George February 22, 2023 at 4:55 AM Enjoyed your comment ! :) :) Sadly images are not allowed. Thanks a lot David

Joanna Daniel February 22, 2023 at 3:21 AM A little naughty, Valsa:) Valsa George February 22, 2023 at 4:53 AM Yes, I know it is naughty... ! Trying to rise the level of Rico :) Thanks Jo ;

Unseeking Seeker February 22, 2023 at 1:59 AM Hahaha Valsa George February 22, 2023 at 4:51 AM hee.... hee ! Thanks a lot Seeker friend