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Wandering Gaze

As she bent down unintended The old man's lewd eyes descended Stuck on the two round moon Making him at once swoon ................................... Just fun, no offense intended! Feb.22. 2023 Put your Best Limerick( Be Like Rico Leffanta) Poetry Contest Sponsor- Andrea Dietrich

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Date: 3/13/2023 4:36:00 PM
Good job on this one, Valsa. Better to call it double moon! haha. congrats, dear.
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Date: 2/28/2023 9:36:00 AM
Very nice, Valsa.
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Date: 2/26/2023 2:44:00 PM
That is so nice...
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Date: 2/24/2023 7:43:00 AM
Very funny poem , : )
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Date: 2/23/2023 5:57:00 AM
Creative work!! Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Date: 2/22/2023 11:10:00 PM
this is kind of natural, thanks for the smile yann
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Date: 2/22/2023 6:56:00 PM
Ha, ha! I don't think you've offended anyone here. Nice going, gw
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Date: 2/22/2023 4:06:00 PM
I generally look away. There is a time and place for everything...never the time and place when my wife is standing next to me:) Only kidding. Fun read. Thank you.
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Date: 2/22/2023 9:36:00 AM
LOL…funny. Some people where low cut clothing and complain about a man’s gaze going lower than it ought…hmm. Still that same man is often looking anyway.
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Date: 2/22/2023 7:05:00 AM
Lovely limerick. Excellent. Hugs.
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Date: 2/22/2023 6:50:00 AM
Funny Limerick Valsa, thanks for the grin. Good luck with the contest.
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Date: 2/22/2023 4:26:00 AM
Oh Valsa you do know Rico would not be happy with your Limerick, why! Because you haven’t embedded a photo of the spectacle, Tut Tut! Good fun write. Cheers David
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Valsa George
Date: 2/22/2023 4:55:00 AM
Enjoyed your comment ! :) :) Sadly images are not allowed. Thanks a lot David
Date: 2/22/2023 3:21:00 AM
A little naughty, Valsa:)
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Valsa George
Date: 2/22/2023 4:53:00 AM
Yes, I know it is naughty... ! Trying to rise the level of Rico :) Thanks Jo ;
Date: 2/22/2023 1:59:00 AM
Hahaha
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Valsa George
Date: 2/22/2023 4:51:00 AM
hee.... hee ! Thanks a lot Seeker friend

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