Waltz With Every Season

Undulate on burbling rivers rushing to meet sea,
Buoying spring’s hilarity, ceding to summer’s plea;
Marvel on wings of autumn as falling colors spree,
Rejoice pristine snowflakes adulating winter’s glee;

Waltz with every season strumming life’s themes,
On mountains, in valleys, on prairies, or streams,
Waxing or waning, dreaming beauteous dreams.

Sail on crest of tides where summer ebbs and flows,
Guide autumn’s journey thrilling season of snows,
Whether lauding sunshine or twilight in shadows,
Whether in blazing colors or woes of wintry throes;

Waltz with every season strumming life’s themes,
On mountains, in valleys, on prairies, or streams,
Waxing or waning, dreaming beauteous dreams.

Despair not in shudder of shivering naked trees,
For autumn decaying in clasp of wintry freeze,
Sows the seeds sprouting exuberance of spring,
Where, serenading renewal, doting robins sing;

Waltz with every season strumming life’s themes,
On mountains, in valleys, on prairies, or streams,
Waxing or waning, dreaming beauteous dreams.

Alas! soon blossoms wilt, autumn’s revelry ends,
And unseen remains future where tomorrow bends,
So, grab your today and let its winter day-dream
In the seasons of youth, fond memories redeem.

Waltz with every season strumming life’s themes,
On mountains, in valleys, on prairies, or streams,
Waxing or waning, dreaming beauteous dreams.

July 13, 2022
The Time Between the Seasons Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Kim Rodrigues
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Buehler Avatar
June 3, 2023 at 12:16 PM
I much enjoyed this glorious song of the seasons, Vijay. This is in my faves.
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July 27, 2022 at 6:32 AM
Vijay, you have conveyed a powerful message about the majesty of the seasons in nature and in life. The idea of waltzing with the seasons is very appealing. Janice
Pandit Avatar
July 31, 2022 at 6:46 AM
Thank you Janice. Much appreciate and value your comments.
Baker Avatar
July 21, 2022 at 2:15 PM
Great entry for the contest, Vijay. I enjoyed the repeated lines between the seasons verses. The alliteration and exquisite rhyming were also a treat. A FAV for me. Thanks for sharing your poetry with us my friend. Bill
Pandit Avatar
July 22, 2022 at 11:41 AM
Always a delight to read your insightful feedback, Bill. Many thanks for your visit and comments--special thanks for your FAVE.
Fowler Avatar
July 21, 2022 at 2:03 PM
Stunning and hauntingly beautiful Vijay. Brilliant repeating stanza between your seasons! Linda
Pandit Avatar
July 22, 2022 at 11:40 AM
So very kind of you Linda--much appreciate. Many thanks.
Tor Avatar
July 19, 2022 at 2:13 PM
Vijay your words bring life to the seasons. I love the originality in your words, the form you incorporated into the write is perfect for what you wanted to achieve. Reading this winning entry shows the tremendous effort you put forth. I hope the Judges realize this. Congratulations Vijay, truly enjoyed reading my friend...
Pandit Avatar
July 19, 2022 at 3:53 PM
Thank you my friend. Much appreciate you taking the time to write detailed, insightful, kind remarks. Glad you stopped by, Michael.
Dietrich Avatar
July 19, 2022 at 1:43 PM
That was genius putting the repeating stanza in there as it denotes BETWEEN seasons. Very cool idea.
Pandit Avatar
July 19, 2022 at 3:52 PM
So nice to hear that from you Andrea. Much appreciate--many thanks.
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 17, 2022 at 2:04 PM
The beauty of the seasons are captured by your stanzas Vijay. A very lovely entry my friend. This poem is sure to be on the winner’s list. Blessings xxoo
Pandit Avatar
July 19, 2022 at 3:51 PM
Thank you my friend. Much appreciate your kind thoughts, Connie.
Horsman Avatar
July 15, 2022 at 8:13 PM
yes like the river that burbles towards the sea, the poetry sure does waltz all the way, Vijay, just love this entry in to the contest.
Pandit Avatar
July 16, 2022 at 8:46 AM
So glad to hear that, Harry. Much appreciate your visit and comments. many thanks.
Mcconnell Avatar
July 15, 2022 at 11:38 AM
Lovely piece penned so excellently Vijay, lovely rhyme and flow too. Blessings,Gordon
Pandit Avatar
July 16, 2022 at 8:45 AM
Honored by your visit, Gordon. So glad you stopped by with your kind remarks. Much appreciate. Blessings.
May Avatar
July 15, 2022 at 8:35 AM
You describe the seasons beautifully Vijay, Best wishes
Pandit Avatar
July 16, 2022 at 8:45 AM
That is so special to hear that from you Joseph. Many thanks for your visit and comments.
Kendrick Avatar
July 15, 2022 at 7:32 AM
Reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. I like the chorus stanza that you used in this one. Creative way to go. Thanks for the visit to my page with your nice review. Sara
Pandit Avatar
July 16, 2022 at 8:44 AM
Enjoyed reading your heartfelt feedback, Sara. Much appreciate your kind remarks, as always. Many thanks.
Jayasankar Avatar
July 15, 2022 at 3:35 AM
This is so sublime Vijayji... Loved the refrain... Loved the voice of your poem, especially in the stanza... " Despair not in shudder...... doting robins sing"... Yes, we need to enjoy the beauty of every moment of every season as well as the time between the seasons... To my FAVs.... Forgot to mention your poem flows well nice rhymes too... God bless... ~ Ani
Pandit Avatar
July 16, 2022 at 8:43 AM
So nice to hear that from a talented writer, Ani. Always a delight to read your comments. Much appreciate your valued opinion and it's very special to receive your FAVE. Many thanks for your kind remarks.
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July 14, 2022 at 1:01 PM
A portrait of nature's panoramic view painted by your fairy's magic rod, my dearest friend, Vijay! A Fave. Blessings! I hope now it is registered!
Pandit Avatar
July 14, 2022 at 4:02 PM
So special to hear that from you my gifted friend. Much appreciate your complimentary remarks and your FAVE. Many thanks for your support, as always, Demetrios.
Sands Avatar
July 14, 2022 at 6:29 AM
I love this beautiful poem and inspiring ending too. Well written Vijay ! A Fave for me :)
Pandit Avatar
July 14, 2022 at 11:38 AM
So very kind of you Heidi. A special treat to receive your FAVE. Many thanks for your visit and comments and especially your FAVE.
George Avatar
July 14, 2022 at 6:09 AM
What a lovely read ! The refrain infuses a new vigor and creates a feeling of life throbbing around ! Enjoy today's splendor before blossoms wilt and autumn's revelry ends... ! L O V E L Y poem with a lovely message! My Fave....
Pandit Avatar
July 14, 2022 at 11:37 AM
Glad you liked the refrain, Valsa. I do too. Much appreciate your FAVE and complimentary remarks. So nice to hear that from a gifted writer. Many thanks.
Gentile Avatar
July 14, 2022 at 5:09 AM
Vijay, I lobe the recurring line, Strumming life's theme! What a beautiful way to reflect on each season and to connect with its beauty! Your imagery is, as always, top notch! Happy Thursday!
Pandit Avatar
July 14, 2022 at 11:35 AM
Yes--the joy of the seasons! Much appreciate, Mike, your kind remarks. Many thanks.
Andresen Avatar
July 14, 2022 at 1:38 AM
- Vijay, a beautiful poem with atmosphere and a pleasure to read ... a winning poem already ... wow :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pandit Avatar
July 14, 2022 at 11:32 AM
I truly appreciate your vote of confidence, Anne-Lise. So glad you stopped by with your kind feedback. Many thanks.
Buhagiar Avatar
July 14, 2022 at 1:33 AM
Indeed we should enjoy the in between of seasons for the have much to offer. A wonderful poem, perfect diction and thoughts. Best for a win.
Pandit Avatar
July 14, 2022 at 11:31 AM
So very kind of you, Victor. Much appreciate your complimentary feedback. Many thanks for your visit and comments.
Cunningham Avatar
July 14, 2022 at 12:12 AM
Your golden pen is flowing Vijay, superb imagery and vocabulary which is your trademark. Best of luck in the contest. Tom
Pandit Avatar
July 14, 2022 at 11:30 AM
So nice to hear that from you, Tom. Much appreciate that you are always there for everyone. Many thanks, Tom.
Nicole Avatar
July 13, 2022 at 8:50 PM
"So, grab your today and waltz with every season". Yes, I would be happy too, my dear friend. We should embrace each moment, between the seasons. You have painted such vivid images with your words. This is beautiful in every way. My heart is smiling. :) Brandy
Pandit Avatar
July 14, 2022 at 11:29 AM
I agree--all we have is now. Much appreciate your insightful remarks my dear friend. Many thanks for your visit and comments, Brandy.
Poet Avatar
July 13, 2022 at 7:28 PM
Vijay, with this amazing and excellent work of poetry, you brought us to a range of diverse fields and areas. I felt as if I were actually there. Dancing to the rhythm of the seasons and longing for their return. Creating works of poetry that are both brilliant and brimming with beauty requires a great deal of expertise. With your superb metaphors and illuminating syntax, you guide us through an ocean of magnificent nuances of thought that would never get stale. Best for a win
Pandit Avatar
July 14, 2022 at 11:27 AM
Thank you my friend for taking the time to write detailed, analytical comments. Much appreciate your valued opinion, kind remarks, Lasaad. Many thanks.
Delaney Avatar
July 13, 2022 at 4:54 PM
Waltzing with the seasons waiting for their renewal. Lovely reflections, Vijay. Best, SuZ
Pandit Avatar
July 14, 2022 at 11:25 AM
Glad you stopped by SuZ. Much appreciate your feedback--many thanks.
Rose  Avatar
July 13, 2022 at 2:30 PM
Rumi would be so proud of you, you breathe poetry more easily then anyone I know, lovely write Vijay, you took me away to another place and time, gl
Pandit Avatar
July 14, 2022 at 11:24 AM
So very kind of you, Vienna. Always a joy when you visit. Much appreciate your kind remarks. Many thanks.
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