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Beatrice Offor - Esme Dancing

Waltz of the Waves

"Shall
we waltz?
Could 
we waltz?
Would you waltz
with me?
Could
you dance,
would you dance
far across the 
shining sea?
Will you fly
by my
side?
We'll kiss
a sad world
goodbye.
Come 
sing with
me."




{Waltz Wave. Written June 14, 2015.}
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Maverick Avatar
July 15, 2023 at 3:55 PM
Good reading here Isaiah, it merits the feature.' I often get the hankering to leave this place now.' Yet we are here so lets try to do our best Though limited it may be' good to read the lighter content also I need cheer as much as Any persson.'
Allison Avatar
July 15, 2023 at 1:36 PM
So lovely to see your poem featured Isaiah. I think of you often and wonder how you are doing. You inspired me so much in my early days to try hard with my imagery especially with the pictures you used. Hugs jan xx
Roper Avatar
June 18, 2015 at 6:37 PM
congratulations on your wonderful win. Hugs Eve
Allison Avatar
June 18, 2015 at 1:51 PM
A beautiful poem Isaiah many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
A  Avatar
June 18, 2015 at 12:56 PM
A beautiful and delicate verse. Isaiah, Congratulations on your win. Love **SKAT**
Nance Avatar
June 18, 2015 at 11:45 AM
Your waltz has a music and a dance to it that is flowing and fun to read! Nicely done!
Dietrich Avatar
June 17, 2015 at 11:09 PM
ahhh, you thought on the same lines as I did, making it a real waltz!! Congrats, my friend.
Gorelick Avatar
June 17, 2015 at 8:29 PM
It surely has a rhythm to it..congrats on your win. BG
Merryman Avatar
June 17, 2015 at 5:47 PM
Isaiah, congrats on taking top spot in my contest! Your words flow so smoothly. I just love it! Well done! Love, Kim
Manassian Avatar
June 14, 2015 at 5:39 PM
You made this seem so easy Isaiah....I did struggle, I must admit. Good luck in the contest. I see that you will do very well, indeed. This is beautiful in every way... :) Hugs
Andresen Avatar
June 14, 2015 at 12:38 PM
- A lovely poem, Isaiah - // Anne-Lise :)
Harding Avatar
June 14, 2015 at 10:47 AM
Cool ending, nice write!
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