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Beatrice Offor - Esme Dancing

"Shall we waltz? Could we waltz? Would you waltz with me? Could you dance, would you dance far across the shining sea? Will you fly by my side? We'll kiss a sad world goodbye. Come sing with me." {Waltz Wave. Written June 14, 2015.}

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Date: 7/15/2023 3:55:00 PM
Good reading here Isaiah, it merits the feature.' I often get the hankering to leave this place now.' Yet we are here so lets try to do our best Though limited it may be' good to read the lighter content also I need cheer as much as Any persson.'
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Date: 7/15/2023 1:36:00 PM
So lovely to see your poem featured Isaiah. I think of you often and wonder how you are doing. You inspired me so much in my early days to try hard with my imagery especially with the pictures you used. Hugs jan xx
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Date: 6/18/2015 6:37:00 PM
congratulations on your wonderful win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 6/18/2015 1:51:00 PM
A beautiful poem Isaiah many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/18/2015 12:56:00 PM
A beautiful and delicate verse. Isaiah, Congratulations on your win. Love **SKAT**
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Date: 6/18/2015 11:45:00 AM
Your waltz has a music and a dance to it that is flowing and fun to read! Nicely done!
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Date: 6/17/2015 11:09:00 PM
ahhh, you thought on the same lines as I did, making it a real waltz!! Congrats, my friend.
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Date: 6/17/2015 8:29:00 PM
It surely has a rhythm to it..congrats on your win. BG
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Date: 6/17/2015 5:47:00 PM
Isaiah, congrats on taking top spot in my contest! Your words flow so smoothly. I just love it! Well done! Love, Kim
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Date: 6/14/2015 5:39:00 PM
You made this seem so easy Isaiah....I did struggle, I must admit. Good luck in the contest. I see that you will do very well, indeed. This is beautiful in every way... :) Hugs
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Date: 6/14/2015 12:38:00 PM
- A lovely poem, Isaiah - // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/14/2015 10:47:00 AM
Cool ending, nice write!
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