Waltz of the Waves

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Beatrice Offor - Esme Dancing

"Shall
we waltz?
Could 
we waltz?
Would you waltz
with me?
Could
you dance,
would you dance
far across the 
shining sea?
Will you fly
by my
side?
We'll kiss
a sad world
goodbye.
Come 
sing with
me."




{Waltz Wave. Written June 14, 2015.}

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Joe Maverick

Date: 7/15/2023 3:55:00 PM

Good reading here Isaiah, it merits the feature.' I often get the hankering to leave this place now.' Yet we are here so lets try to do our best Though limited it may be' good to read the lighter content also I need cheer as much as Any persson.'

Jan Allison

Date: 7/15/2023 1:36:00 PM

So lovely to see your poem featured Isaiah. I think of you often and wonder how you are doing. You inspired me so much in my early days to try hard with my imagery especially with the pictures you used. Hugs jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 6/18/2015 6:37:00 PM

congratulations on your wonderful win. Hugs Eve

Jan Allison

Date: 6/18/2015 1:51:00 PM

A beautiful poem Isaiah many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Skat A

Date: 6/18/2015 12:56:00 PM

A beautiful and delicate verse. Isaiah, Congratulations on your win. Love **SKAT**

Casarah Nance

Date: 6/18/2015 11:45:00 AM

Your waltz has a music and a dance to it that is flowing and fun to read! Nicely done!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/17/2015 11:09:00 PM

ahhh, you thought on the same lines as I did, making it a real waltz!! Congrats, my friend.

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 6/17/2015 8:29:00 PM

It surely has a rhythm to it..congrats on your win. BG

Kim Merryman

Date: 6/17/2015 5:47:00 PM

Isaiah, congrats on taking top spot in my contest! Your words flow so smoothly. I just love it! Well done! Love, Kim

Eileen Manassian

Date: 6/14/2015 5:39:00 PM

You made this seem so easy Isaiah....I did struggle, I must admit. Good luck in the contest. I see that you will do very well, indeed. This is beautiful in every way... :) Hugs