Barbara Gorelick Poet Rhyme

Walking the Shoreline

the surf relentlessly pounding
always teasing the shore
leaving hints of its mystery
treasures, bits of sea lore

now I walk this lonely shoreline
the gulls follow my trail
tasting the salts of yesterday
on the wind dreams set sail



Barbara Gorelick 3/28/15

Let Me Feel Your Lines
 "shoreline"

♡Like0

Share Poem

---

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Sara Kendrick May 18, 2015 at 12:15 PM Ahh!! I like this winner..Congrats...

Andrea Dietrich May 16, 2015 at 12:15 AM I really like this, Barbara. For me, one of the best!! Congrats.

Joseph May May 15, 2015 at 9:42 AM Wonderful write, Congrats on your win Barbara Gorelick May 15, 2015 at 12:37 PM Thank you so much..appreciate your comments. BG

Sandra Haight May 15, 2015 at 7:05 AM You create such a lovely image in your poem, Barbara..."tasting the salts of yesterday"...beautiful...Congratulations on your win. Hugs, Sandra

Kp Nunez May 15, 2015 at 4:58 AM A lovely write, Barbara. Congratulations! Kim

Poet Destroyer A May 14, 2015 at 7:42 PM Barbara :-) Amazing Lines, Congratulations ~LINDA~

Jan Allison May 14, 2015 at 6:02 PM I am surrounded by the sea on our little Island - a beautifully penned poem - many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx

Skat A May 14, 2015 at 5:22 PM Barbara, congratulations on your win. SKAT

Kim Shaw April 2, 2015 at 7:57 PM Barbara, I love the fourth line....brings back memories of my early teens when I lived on an island off of the coast of British Columbia, Canada. My brother and I spent wonderful days searching the beach for 'treasures and bits of sea lore'. Hugs, Kimberly

Paul Callus April 2, 2015 at 1:44 PM Yes, I can feel your lines, Barbara; you create a lovely image, and I love the phrase "tasting the salts of yesterday". #7 All the best. // paul Paul Callus May 15, 2015 at 1:33 PM And back with merited congratulations, Barbara!:) // paul

Joseph May March 31, 2015 at 8:55 PM Beautiful write BG....best wishes

Constance La France March 31, 2015 at 3:54 PM Barbara your lines are full of feeling and beauty, A7 and thanks for visiting my poetry

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders March 29, 2015 at 2:50 PM Beautiful and poignant flowing lines, Barbara! I enjoyed...best wishes in the contest...hugs, Rhonda

Viv Wigley March 28, 2015 at 2:25 PM lovely, and wistful. Nice work, Barbara. Viv x Barbara Gorelick March 28, 2015 at 8:17 PM Thank you, glad you stopped by. BArbara

Casarah Nance March 28, 2015 at 10:39 AM Oh that is wonderfully done! Barbara Gorelick March 28, 2015 at 8:18 PM thank you so much..Barbara