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Walking the Shoreline

the surf relentlessly pounding always teasing the shore leaving hints of its mystery treasures, bits of sea lore now I walk this lonely shoreline the gulls follow my trail tasting the salts of yesterday on the wind dreams set sail Barbara Gorelick 3/28/15 Let Me Feel Your Lines "shoreline"

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/18/2015 12:15:00 PM

Ahh!! I like this winner..Congrats...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/16/2015 12:15:00 AM

I really like this, Barbara. For me, one of the best!! Congrats.

Joseph May

Date: 5/15/2015 9:42:00 AM

Wonderful write, Congrats on your win

Barbara Gorelick
Date: 5/15/2015 12:37:00 PM

Thank you so much..appreciate your comments. BG

Sandra Haight

Date: 5/15/2015 7:05:00 AM

You create such a lovely image in your poem, Barbara..."tasting the salts of yesterday"...beautiful...Congratulations on your win. Hugs, Sandra

Kp Nunez

Date: 5/15/2015 4:58:00 AM

A lovely write, Barbara. Congratulations! Kim

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/14/2015 7:42:00 PM

Barbara :-) Amazing Lines, Congratulations ~LINDA~

Jan Allison

Date: 5/14/2015 6:02:00 PM

I am surrounded by the sea on our little Island - a beautifully penned poem - many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx

Skat A

Date: 5/14/2015 5:22:00 PM

Barbara, congratulations on your win. SKAT

Kim Shaw

Date: 4/2/2015 7:57:00 PM

Barbara, I love the fourth line....brings back memories of my early teens when I lived on an island off of the coast of British Columbia, Canada. My brother and I spent wonderful days searching the beach for 'treasures and bits of sea lore'. Hugs, Kimberly