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Walking On Stars

Walking on sunlight, spongy and soft like the grass sauntering on the moon, blue cushioned bounces of joy stepping on stars, silver bursts of happiness all around flying with eagles, notorious wings of power and thrust climbing an oak, filaments of wood on your tongue entering soil, we feel like we are mulched like flowers if paper airplanes float on water as well as sail ships then why do we need a solid stern take the slow ride home and loose your earth power it will surprise you what is real and what is not you will find that what is not is actually there and what is real, can always be forgot...

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Anil Deo

Date: 4/22/2022 12:48:00 AM

Powerful, poetry, penetrating! I wrote just now for PS, "the human being as pattern." Did we ride the same wave if light to PS? Shalom shalOm Dear

Heidi Sands

Date: 4/20/2022 6:46:00 PM

Yes, a thought provoking poem. It made me think of the paper boats years ago . I enjoyed this fun poem :)

Eve Roper

Date: 4/20/2022 11:15:00 AM

Thoughts to ponder my friend. Hugs and all is well

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 4/20/2022 2:44:00 PM

Thank you dear Eve, for your visit here, may all be well with you , enjoy the family moments that is all that we cherish these days. Love xo

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 4/20/2022 7:19:00 AM

There is much to think of in this poem. So many images. Great poem.

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 4/20/2022 2:43:00 PM

Thank you dear Victor for your kind comment, keep well

Vijay Pandit

Date: 4/20/2022 5:08:00 AM

Insightful thoughts, Vienna. What is not is actually there...

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 4/20/2022 5:39:00 AM

Thankyou for stopping by dear Vijay, I live by it, most nights, and dream of it by day, and the rest I leave to reality, lol, have a blessed day, God speed !