Walking On Stars

Walking on sunlight, spongy and soft like the grass 
sauntering on the moon, blue cushioned bounces of joy 
stepping on stars, silver bursts of happiness all around 

flying with eagles, notorious wings of power and thrust 
climbing an oak, filaments of wood on your tongue 
entering soil, we feel like we are mulched like flowers 


if paper airplanes float on water as well as sail ships 
then why do we need a solid stern 
take the slow ride home and loose your earth power 

it will surprise you what is real and what is not 
you will find that what is not is actually there 
and what is real, can always be forgot...
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Date: 4/22/2022 12:48:00 AM
Powerful, poetry, penetrating! I wrote just now for PS, "the human being as pattern." Did we ride the same wave if light to PS? Shalom shalOm Dear
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Date: 4/20/2022 6:46:00 PM
Yes, a thought provoking poem. It made me think of the paper boats years ago . I enjoyed this fun poem :)
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Date: 4/20/2022 11:15:00 AM
Thoughts to ponder my friend. Hugs and all is well
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Date: 4/20/2022 2:44:00 PM
Thank you dear Eve, for your visit here, may all be well with you , enjoy the family moments that is all that we cherish these days. Love xo
Date: 4/20/2022 7:19:00 AM
There is much to think of in this poem. So many images. Great poem.
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Date: 4/20/2022 2:43:00 PM
Thank you dear Victor for your kind comment, keep well
Date: 4/20/2022 5:08:00 AM
Insightful thoughts, Vienna. What is not is actually there...
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Date: 4/20/2022 5:39:00 AM
Thankyou for stopping by dear Vijay, I live by it, most nights, and dream of it by day, and the rest I leave to reality, lol, have a blessed day, God speed !
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