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Walking On Snow

It seemed this was the February 
  of continual cold and snow, 
many days stuck safely in the house
 save for the morning expedition out,
  to clear a path for the birds and my dog and I;
not too much
  just enough of a path to walk.

Not sure which of us was more cautious
   the birds, the dog, or I.
Today, 
  as February nears its end
   and the sun has returned
we venture 
   just a little further out.

My dog realizes the possibility
  of walking atop the unmelted snow
suddenly, we have all the yard to peruse
  and steadily we go until
   we slip and slide as if on frozen ice
and each of us
  takes a slippery and chilly spill.

Back inside
    bruised and cold
     we both realize we don't like 
walking on the snow.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 2/26/2021 8:22:00 PM
DM, This one makes me a little jealous. What must they be thinking, the dog, the birds, and the snow(?) They'll be waiting for your next miracle moment I'm sure. Though may just have to wait 'til next year. -Richard
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Date: 2/26/2021 12:55:00 PM
I can picture this exactly. My yard is full of frozen snow. Some of it strong enough to hold myself or dog standing, but slippery and other parts sinking through! I have paths, too. Well done :)
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