Walking on a Knife's Edge

Dangers plague this shambolic world in which we live
where many seek vengeance and are not apt to forgive.
It's a never-ending cycle of accuse, battle, and defeat
at any cost, walking on a knifes edge with bloody feet.
Perpetual confrontation: nation vs. nation, combative.

Everyone is power hungry to become king of the hill,
stepping on each other as if we're bodies in a landfill.
Humanity teeters for balance before falling from a cliff.
Why doesn't anyone ask the right question..."What If?"
What if arbitrary wars ended without the need to kill?

What if no one felt the need for control and greed
and what if peace prevailed when it has been decreed?
Would the world then become a Gandhian escape,
or would wolves be disguised in a sheepskin serape?
Demented are those who enjoy watching others bleed.

Mankind does not realize the havoc it's been wreaking.
It's their terror and aggression we should be critiquing,
but I fear this selfish world will never be of one accord
until the day when humanity no longer raises a sword.
Disgraceful are immoral leaders who are self-seeking.

Death seeks a ransom, always demanding we pay more.
So, when it comes knocking, stand guard at your door
or risk falling from precipice height, the peril of a ledge.
Wagering on war is a dangerous bet no one should hedge,
for walking on a knife's edge is something we should abhor.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024



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Date: 5/28/2024 2:40:00 AM
Superbly crafted poem Lin, rich in wisdom and deep observation of the human condition. You hold the poem together with great skill from the first line to the last...takes discipline and a command of language to do that. Just a pleasure to read and savor.
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Date: 5/28/2024 4:47:00 AM
Hello, Paul. Reading your comments is a pleasure for me. You make sense of what my lines are trying to convey in the nicest way possible. Thank you for such nice remarks.
Date: 5/26/2024 8:43:00 AM
This is a very powerful and intelligently written poem, Lin. So much wisdom and truth. Stellar writing!!! ...and to think, it all started from one man and one woman, in a garden. This is what we've become.
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Date: 5/26/2024 4:48:00 PM
Thanks, Danny. Wishful thinking of how this could be but didn't turn out as God intended. . . yet.
Date: 5/25/2024 7:43:00 PM
Dearest Lin, wow, incredibly powerful. Your words artistically capture the relentless cycle of conflict and the destructive nature of power struggles. I love how the walking with bloody feet on a knife’s edge is haunting and deeply evocative. Your call for peace and questioning of our collective choices is striking and necessary. Lin, what a great reflection on our world’s harsh realities. Blessings My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Date: 5/26/2024 8:23:00 AM
We bleed from being wounded by others in so many ways. Thank you for being such a loyal reader. Sorry I'm not around very much lately to read more of you and others. My heart's just not feeling poetic at the moment.
Date: 5/23/2024 2:47:00 PM
It’s in our nature Lin, if it wasn’t there would be a lasting peace, I’m a prime example myself, if attacked I believe in defending myself by all possible means, I also believe war is essential if a nation is under existential attack, I do understand what you’re saying, and you’ve written a wonderful aspirational poem here, cheers David
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David Kavanagh
Date: 5/23/2024 4:26:00 PM
We’re only human Lin!
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Lin Lane
Date: 5/23/2024 3:47:00 PM
I’m all for defensive actions. Pity it’s a way of life.
Date: 5/23/2024 11:33:00 AM
the whole world is in turmoil Lin it is beyond scary what man is doing to eachother and to many many innocents caught up in the atrocities:-( hugs jan xx
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Date: 5/23/2024 9:53:00 AM
Sad that some live to make war, to bring chaos, to rob happiness, to distort reality, etc… Those of sound mind do abhor war. Bless you, dear poet!
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