Walking Into Walls

Walls into which we Blindly walk should wake us up; But they rarely do.

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Tom Cunningham

Date: 4/2/2019 5:39:00 PM

We make mistakes in lifes path but hopefully learn from them but not always. Tom

M. L. Kiser
Date: 4/2/2019 10:31:00 PM

Thanks Tom.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/2/2019 3:30:00 PM

great profound message in this small poem!

M. L. Kiser
Date: 4/2/2019 10:31:00 PM

Thanks.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 4/2/2019 3:17:00 PM

A powerful write, MLK. You delivered the message with impact.

M. L. Kiser
Date: 4/2/2019 10:32:00 PM

Good, thanks for the comment.

Eve Roper

Date: 4/2/2019 2:01:00 PM

Very well said, my friend, in my case get up dizzy and literally do like a ping pong ball in play walk into the walls . Hugs Eve ~`*

M. L. Kiser
Date: 4/2/2019 10:32:00 PM

Ooh, that can hurt. Thanks.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 4/2/2019 1:25:00 PM

Oh, I am so into this poem! In more than one meaning; especially metaphoric walls!

M. L. Kiser
Date: 4/2/2019 10:32:00 PM

Ah, thank you.