Seren Roberts Poet Roundel

Walking In Sunshine - Carousel In Roundel Contest

Walking in sunshine, along life's highway, 
Smiling with happiness feeling just fine.
Music fills my soul I am loving this day
Walking in sunshine

A carousel awaits me, horses look fine, 
The music making  me dream a lovers play,
Twisting my hair until  my face meets thine,
Riding together, our bodies sway

Happiness prevails in this heart of mine,
Where is the lover my dreams portray,
Walking in sunshine.

Contest: Carousel in Roundel

Penned by Seren Roberts. On 16 August 2013

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Skat A August 20, 2013 at 9:01 PM beautiful... congrats in the CAROUSEL IN ROUNDEL contest... SKAT Seren Roberts August 20, 2013 at 9:51 PM Thank you SKAT.....Seren

Barbara Gorelick August 20, 2013 at 4:44 PM Oh boy, I love this one. I would have placed it much higher. BG Seren Roberts August 20, 2013 at 6:34 PM Thank you BG....Seren

Sara Kendrick August 20, 2013 at 4:27 PM Great winning work..Enjoyed reading it today..Congrats...Sara Seren Roberts August 20, 2013 at 6:34 PM Thank you Sara ...Seren

Kash Poet August 20, 2013 at 1:34 PM I love your approach here Seren.Beautiful poem.Congrats on the win. Seren Roberts August 20, 2013 at 6:36 PM Thnk you Ash ... Seren

Richard Lamoureux August 20, 2013 at 8:32 AM I enjoyed the walk, congratulations. Seren Roberts August 20, 2013 at 6:39 PM Hi Richard thans for calling by ... Seren

Tahera Mannan August 19, 2013 at 10:56 PM Many congrats on your win. A wonderful write. Seren Roberts August 20, 2013 at 6:41 PM Many thanks Tahera, ....Seren

Danesh Morgan August 19, 2013 at 7:47 PM Congrats on your win. Morgan Seren Roberts August 20, 2013 at 6:39 PM Tnank u Morgan

Poet Destroyer A August 19, 2013 at 4:42 PM Seren, Thanks for the wonderful "CAROUSEL" ride.... Congratulations with your winning poem in Nette's contest. always & forever *PD :-)

Andrea Dietrich August 19, 2013 at 3:07 PM Way to go, Seren. it was a cute poem that you did. Congrats for your win. BTW, I haven't got time yet to see the thing you soupmailed me about. Maybe I will go do that right now!

Shadow Hamilton August 17, 2013 at 4:28 AM I like it Seren will soup mail you Shadow x smiles Seren Roberts August 17, 2013 at 3:46 PM Ok thx

Russell Sivey August 16, 2013 at 11:01 PM You have written a tremendous write my friend! You have done an excellent Roundel, and have written the content very well! I really enjoyed reading this enlightening poem this evening! What a powerful piece, Great Work!!

Shadow Hamilton August 16, 2013 at 7:31 AM Seren you took me there gl in contest Shadow x smiles Seren Roberts August 17, 2013 at 3:47 PM Glad you enjoyed your journey ..seren